Good book only that the beginning has Abit of problem...
Great book with interesting story. The powerlevel of the MC follows an exponential curve, starting from zero and picks up massive speed - while still feeling "reasonable".The writing quality is good, updates are stable, the story is captivating, the characters are interesting and the background is presented to the reader through the story step by step naturally.Well done!
??? Bru, this is funny lol. Please editors pick this??????????????????????????????????????????????
This Story will be super intresting. The author start this time was much better than what he started previously. I am a fan of your first work: The God level Mage. I can't wait to see what would happen with this one too
reading the first 20 chaps and the story line feels forced and unrealistic. but i love the concept and hope to enjoy more. .
The story of the novel is quite straightforward which is basketball. Simply basketball. This correlates with his character, as from my perspective, the protagonist is emotionless and sole pursuit in life is basketball. The world is self-explanatory (USA).Honestly, this novel is quite boring. There's nothing besides basketball, which I understand is the whole theme and all, but what about his family? the audience's (people in the novel) perspective? romantic interests? Essentially, he's like a robot.
Too boring. Again main hero become too strong too fast and surrounded by cartoon characters. Too bad, I expect more interesting story development.
another typical chinese mc he is born vampire but to save a human woman and her daughter(total strangers btw) he went on to offend the strongest existence in the vampiric rmpire when he himself was weak and a vampire? its not like the vampires treated him badly or bullied him nah he saw a woman in trouble and his chinese morals took over this story would have been so much better if he just minded his own fricking business
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The story is very boring the ML went to go missing for 6 yrs because he wants to prove that he is worthy of his wife but when he came back, He just accepts all ridicule and not even showing what he's capable of its a meh story if ur into this kind of story u can try it but if u don't what those dramas with the FL relatives continuously ridiculing the ML for so many chapters then don't bother reading this.
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Horrible, misunderstandings and conflicts that can be solved with just a sentence or a call is stretched out to 3-6 chapters.MC says that he's realized the importance of power, yet he doesn't actively do something to acquire it even though he has a cheat that can insta-learn everything with just a glance(in some ways it's more OP than LOHP). He doesn't surf the web for useful manuals i.e programming, other language, martial arts..etc. those things he can master in just 10 minutes but he doesn't seem to want them.MC hesitates to join an organization that equals the military even though he says power is important.People annoys him and wants to/tries to kill him yet he just leaves them with either a swollen face or at worst a broken arms or legs.He says he doesn't want the limelight and doesn't want to show off, but his actions are everything but.Spolier: A perverted martial instructor was assigned to their class and was very unreasonable, feeling the girls and beating the guys with the slightest bit of disagreement. MC could have this instructor replaced and punished with just a call cuz he's a benefactor of someone higher in the organization but nooooo.MC decided to challenge him to a duel, even though he doesn't want the limelight, doesn't want to show off. After he beat the instructor, comes the instructor's older brother, MC still decided to beat the guy even though he doesn't want the LIMELIGHT.With his cheat the book could be more interesting, but the author wants his story to be about everything overused and wants nothing to do with originality.Tl;drOp cheat, dumb mc, hypocrite mc, negative IQ villains, typical wuxia, overused tropes.