Top class novel avoids that useless troupe of chance encounter with women to form romance and harem , sensible mc not just useless chance encounters, but author Nim when are you dropping new chapter or have you dropped the novel
why didn't you get a contract? the story is good where i am readiing. I am readying 10 or so
I'll be completely honest here, I want to like this novel a lot more than I currently do.Writing quality: honestly leaves a lot to be desired, grammar is at times terrible. This wouldn't matter as much if it wasn't for the rampant inconsistency of information given out throughout the story.Story development: is very, very slow, again not a big deal, but the constant changing of basic information given out makes it very hard to follow and quite frankly quite tedious to read at times.Character design: I think the concept is good, and I really appreciate that the mc has for lack of a better word "normal" family life. But there's little to no interaction with others so far(50 chapters in, and we can count the people he's spoken to enough to warrant actual conversation text on 1 hand).Updating stability: I've given this full marks since I'm only 50 chapters in, and I don't know.World Background: Again I love the concept, I really do. I always appreciate a good system and the fact that there's a system for everyone not just mc (albeit not as extensive as the MCs but skills and rating exist for all as well as stones to absorb etc.)
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⭐⭐⭐⭐ I like it, of all the similar novels, this is one of the best and really suits me. Even though there are several boring chapters, they are all good, and it's hard to find a novel with this criterion.
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I Absolutely love it it is fantastic please please please do not drop this novel thank you
Finally a good novel where the mc is not a human, release is pretty good, story is good, sad that mc looks better then me, should give you only 4 stars for that??Hope you dont drop it and are able to finish the story with many chapters ^^
Never been good at writing reviews, and this one might be biased too. All I can say is that this story checks everything that I wanted in a story. A Villain who is not dumb and plain evil. The MC here is quite grey. You could say that he's an Anti-Hero, but the Author says that he's a Villain for a reason and we will see him commit dreadfully evil deeds in the story. As long as he retains his emotions and knows how to cherish his family, I frankly don't care about what he does to other people. One thing that stands out in this story is the Harem of MC. Every girl that has been introduced so far is unique and is fleshed out. They are not just dolls who are 'Vases' in most Chinese Novels. With all the girls introduced so far, it's hard to pick your favourite. The world-building is very interesting and the Author is incorporating Eastern and Western elements in a way that they don't out off readers. Everything that has happened so far (Chapter 94) is a foreshadowing of what is about to come in this long story. Overall, I can't bring myself to rate it any less than a full 5 because I have absolutely loved everything about this story. Keep up the good work, Author! ?
personally, l like the book. it has, good characters, realism, character building, a good author, and also is quite satisfying. like when bad people get what's coming. that being death of course. so overall, 8/10 would recommend.
great story. well written. MC is good. side character's are likable. Though it starts off as a common trop, plot flows nicely and evolves in to its own story. very few grammar mistakes. waiting for more. ????
The story is worth a five star, you can see the efforts that was placed in creating the world background, the characters are loveable and the plot is great. Your story has a lot of potential and i wish you good luck author.