The Minamoto country was once a small territory located on the ports but it has grown to control most of the eastern ports. It has relations with many outside countries and has grown extremely wealthy. In roughly a decade it has expanded six times its original size and has grown to possess enough power to rival the Yamashiki country. The post emperor was a good man and only done things that would benefit the country and its allies. However the emperor suddenly died and his son took over. Unlike his father, the son took his power for granted. He made rash decisions that only granted short term benefits and it is because of him that the Minamoto country's growth has stopped lately.
[Items]: Cotton Shirt, Leather Pants, Leather Shoes, Wooden Sword
-AOT arc has been planned (not sure how long I want the arc to be but I intend to follow the events of the first season of the anime including the trost district, as well as have the mc work in the scout corps for some time)
"This lunatic I do not want to be here any second longer than I am."
A light footstep resounds from his left.
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Echidna : "I know."
"Gau Duzal! My name is Azure Knight, I'm a tome maven that uses Sword Magic. I'm an A-Class Maven but I also participates on S-Class Missions. And also, it is already my fifth year here in Zeul Academy ." The leader introduced.
so let me understand something, paper wasn't invented before mc came????????? seriously? then how the hell did they write letters? also is making papers from wood that easy? the author clearly is an idiot. Seriously, at least see what garbage u are writing. also what's up with the eldest son of the count? his first assassination failed and now he didn't try again for 2 months straight? mc was going out so many times , what the hell was the eldest son doing? seriously the novel is trash. but yeah if u are someone who just likes to read about someone becoming trash to awesome without using your brains, go ahead, this is for u I guess
I read this work. It is good, but at times I wanted to quit. I would be glad if the author or someone who knows how to answer me.1. His level-up heritage gives a direct way to increase stats, but does not use this path. He often says that he needs to become stronger, but after receiving a few stat points, he stops.2.his fate his actions in the past affect his future, (court or his meetings), he tries to substitute his actions for the future, not realizing that everything he does not lead to what happened3. he adds problems to himself (not because of the hero), but because the author so wished. I can say that this is not fate, but the author interferes with the hero4 slow action. he pumped and now he himself says that he is ready to increase the rank, and then the story goes into a completely different direction
Heh ? another!! Author, im slowly looking forward to the development, its seems like there’s more story to it than meet the eyes
In the beginning it was church now it jump to exploring the universe which then leads to a crowd of side characters gathered together, the MC isn't really introduced all that much, the only thing we know is his nameA beauty introduced into first chapter but its not a "jade" beauty along with a lot of inspiration from other worksit can engage a reader who isn't all that curious and want to waste time. Even the outlines of bolding words, exclamation points (!) actually feel like we're inside the author creation.Although the mona building isn't really describe how big it is until a few chapters later.I would say as someone who spent the first few chapters reading it can really engage you to a world of likable fantasy.Some scenes like magician ones could using clapping to draw attention of the background character in front of them or those around them when they're yelling/scolding others for mistakesHowever in chapter two there is 2 random bolded texts that were suppose to be inaudible, what is this about?In chapter 3, romance is in the works. This kind of engages more plotline depends on how you view/build itI like how you introduced assassins who hide with cloaks on.I get your trying to switch povs a lot, I think labeling that pov from side pov to MC pov may be a good idea to not confuse readersOther than the first few chapters in, you are doing well so for on your novel.