Here to counteract the fact that someone was childish enough to rate a novel purely because the title is similar to the title of another book. People, smh
Very good idea but it can be seen that he is armature writer but keep improving and leave less loophole................................................................................................................................................................
The story line or the plotline is just amazing.. I gets one hooked to it.. Amazing work author.... Good going ??????????????
A very nice polished story. It is clean and clear in world setting and character design. The chapters are way short compared to other novels in Webnovel, but it makes it easy to cruse through the novel.I hope the author will continue writing the novel and more readers take on this hidden gem.
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I can see multiple problem on your story1/the story is very rushed there are multiple times skip in one chapter which removes anytime that allows you to build the world, the character et cetera.2/My second problem, the character building is non-existent even the romance is rushed .3/There is no world building The world existence I want to go from a to b that's all.4/very poor magic system Everyone has an element and you go from 0 to 9 cultivation style If you're add some of magical element from Harry Potter, the quality of the story improve a lot.5/and finally there is no core concept in the story What is the reason behind his existence? What is his goal? from what I see the protagonist only want to become stronger For the sake of being strong, he neither had an ambition or goal that make him want to be stronger is for the sake of being strong that’s all. example for goals that you can put behind your protagonist wanting to know from where comes magic /wanted to discover and research magic/ Rolling the magical world /improving the magic world , et cetera and these are simple goals You can be creative. You can add an enemy From his past and don’t make the protagonist overpowered Because if he is overpowered the story will become boring with no struggle no excitement that’s all for me.
5/5 d(=^･ω･^=)bWow this is one of the best descriptive books I've read! ヽ(=^･ω･^=)丿Each scene forms a vision in my mind as I read through each word (ะ`・ω・´ะ)I hope the author continues writing it! V(=^･ω･^=)v
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I would say this novel is neither bad nor good. Read some 10 12 chapters got bored. The plot has same system cliche. Nowadays too many novels with system plot
This is a novel that will be stand out from the rest. I believe that you gonna enjoy this novel as much I do. But look like it's gonna slow pace. But overall this is worth to be number one.
Fking trash novel, 20 chapter bs fight start from few chapter still not finish bc of fking idiot mc
The story is good the only thing I feel is that the chapter r kinda short maybe a few hundred words more The author is very interactive with the audience He asks for suggestions & if we don't understand any part of the chapter....Join the discord guys, what r u waiting for!!!