This is what i like man. Nice work Kami SAMAA
Does anyone know the mtl novel name? as for an actual review: translation doesn't butcher names as others have saidmc is quite cautious but I enjoyed it anyway. means he is smart and not recklesswell written side charactersmc is motivated for himself, he has his own morals, but is mainly just doing what he wants while trying to stay safesystem isn't inherently op, mc just happens to be able to use it welllastly, no forced romance aspects which is nice
I didn’t read it and unfortunately I don’t think i will when literally the first two sentences in the synopsis are like this.
Reading up to Ch22, it is hard to read. The situation changes are abrupt. Sometimes time would pass suddenly without indication - in one paragraph it is one date, and next, it is suddenly the future. Sometimes the PoV would change abruptly. The living conditions, his location, there is no smooth transition. I have had to re-read the passages to infer things. The relationships he has (he has only 2) are unclear. The only thing that is clear is that world is strong eat the weak and he is very weak. An example, in ch22 he has some people collected outside his house (probably). There is no clear indication if they are grouped outside his door, you can infer but it is confusing.It needs some serious editing.
Story is quite cliche but that why this type of story is quite popular. With only 700 chapters, the story is quite short which is good rather than dragging the story and making it tiresome to the readers and author. Premise is transmigrating with a system. System provides level and skills. It is quite interesting to see how the author makes the skills from LOL, Fate series and other works of fiction combine. The character design is the generic lucky protagonist which it makes the story funny. Overall, the story is not disgusting and quite light.
"of all the vices that we have, sentiment is the one which keeps the world running"This is definitely not er gen's best work, from a critical perspective. But it is most definitely his most beautiful work till date. So much so that I would rank it just below Mao ni's nightfall and I Am Ink's grasping evil.This novel has transcended the bounds of xianxia, just like my former mentions. It is emotionally verbose to a very magnitude.Some of the underlying philosophies are such that each of us might relate to it some extent. Agreed, that this novel is not without er gen's use of his typical plot devices and grand scale deus ex machina, some of which might even be considered cliché, but nonetheless, it is a stellar novel. With a mind blowing world building, super emo characters and er gen's standard 'screw the heavens' tone of the protag throughout the story, this should be a definite read for the enlightened readers looking for something meaty, especially if you're looking for grit in a xianxia which is rarer than a blue moon
ive read a few chapters, and its got a lot of potential, the only problem is the writing quality imo, the descriptions of every action seems almost bland and monotone, it kinda kills the excitement for me. really great backstory for the character should you go more into detail with it. like I said though, it has a lot of potential to be good.
This book was HORRIBLE because the execution was absoulute garbage and one of the main reasons I hate thi story is that he squanders his parents wealth not his own like a novel that has a somewhat similar premise to this but over 100 x better is "losing money to be a tycoon" because HE SPENDS HIS OWN MONEY (And systems but we dont count that)
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I started reading this because the ratings were rather high. I’m sad to say but after 70 chapters, I am disappointed. Writing Quality:I know that the writer is not native to English and there is a certain allotment for this, but I still find the vocabulary to be quite poor.Stability of Updates:I started reading this after 70 chapters were already released but looking at the update times, its somewhat unreliable. Story Development:In my opinion, instead of the all-around system, it’s better to call this the wish system. Why? Because every time there’s conflict or even a bit of a challenge added, the system comes up with a solution. This is the case for even the most inconveniences that comes up for the MC. Some examples are, his level being too low? Solution: magic fruit. Can’t find more fruit? Solution: magic radar. Can’t store all the fruit gathered? Solution: infinite storage. Runs into a strong enemy? Solution: systems upgrades, and he easily crushes the enemies. About to be raped? Solution: magically can use portals to escape. Gets molested by a beauty? His only weakness is cured, and he even powers up.Character Design:All of the characters are rather hollow. Every female is a beauty and every male is ugly except for the MC who is as pretty as the other females. Basically, he’s a trap character.World Background:Some of the background of the universe has been revealed but it was more of an information dump after the MC is “cured”. Instead of having the MC gather info as he progresses, the best way to reveal this information is during pillow talk time it seems. All of this can be summarized as “needs work”.
I find this light-novel very exiting and well thought out. The updates are appropriate and follow a schedule which lets the readers know when new chapters are likely to be released. The story development and writing quality are excellent, it draws the reader in and keeps them expecting more. I feel that the characters could have been more detailed and given more of a emotional and personality feel to them. I think that the world background could have been explained a little more, for example what kind of world is it?, what year was it? How the world was like before the apocalypse? This is my review for this light-novel and I would like to say that I find this novel fascinating and am waiting for more updates. Thanks for sparring your time to read this review weather you are readers or the author, I hope you readers will also enjoy this novel as much as I do. :)