60 chapters in, and I'd say it's pretty niceThe grammar could certainly use some improvement, but I'm sure it's gonna get better with timeJust hope that the updates remain stable
God I can't get enough of this novel???.. I love it..really nice
One of the best books I've seen on this app... tbh it really gives vibess??I love this book.. it's the type that when you see the book..you'd want to immediately finish it...lovely book.........
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A pretty nice concept of Time travel and scifi with a mix of fantasy and Magic. Not something I met everyday. The narration was splendid as it was nearing its perfection. Not something a newbie like can easily criticize. Haha Kudos!
Story straight up makes no sense. Author clearly does not know what story passing and proper development is, and cannot properly narrate the story as their is a lack of explanation for the plot. Simply put only the author would truly understand the story, since whatever the story is only fully narrated in his head. Overall: Garbage tier writing/execution.
WHY DOESN'T THIS HAVE MORE VIEWS? finally.. an amazing story on web novel that I haven't read! the writing is top notch and I read all the chapters in one sitting! love it so far
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As far as I have read, the story is quite captivating, and the grammar used is satisfactory too. It is well-written. Keep up with the good work!
Best story available.hell it has everything I love very detailed story line which will keep you interested ...................,,................::
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