AbdoNasser8115
.................................................................................................................................................^^^^^^^^^^^^^my honest review BRUH
Friendly notice: English is not my first/main language and as such I'm not that great at it. If dear readers notice any grammatical errors or dear readers have an interesting suggestion. Please do let me know.
Sucks that I can't understand the first chapter, no explanation either, I even though there's something wrong with translation with those random letter like rd or kp and random numbers too, but as I read, Ive deduced that is must be a short word for something, but NOT EXPLAINED. Well maybe later on it will be explained, but first impression really matters, sucks that I don't understand, can't immerse myself to it.The translator didn't even tried, he/she should've atleast capped those letters for easier guessing lmao, would've appreciated if there was an info chapter atleast
"Hey!"(you'll see this word alot in this story.. so far as i've read.) It's like a bunch of mmo stories came together to donate some seed and made a baby.. which is this story. ^^' some ppl might enjoy this that might not have read alot of mmo stories before? hard to say, gl to author
Awesome work by the Author. The plot unfolds so smooth almost like velvet and the story has you on the edge of your seat with suspense. Keep writing, very good job.
This is a great novel and have a lot of potential and, to people that don’t like gender bender this won’t be for you. Btw damm you author now I have a thing for gender bend xP
Author, please do not mind the one-stars of few spoiled brats trying to be cool, the silent majority supports you all the way ;_; If you really are to swap to Wattpad exclusive, I shall follow you there, but I'll keep notifications up here anyway.
I'm really enjoying this story!! The characters are well developed and detailed, you get a strong impression of each person. The author is amazing with the details even when it comes to the environment that the characters are in, to the point you can really get a solid image of where they are and what's happening around them. You get submerged into the story and can't stop reading. Can't wait to see how the group evolves and how far they can go with their talent! Thanks for the great story!!!!
hey author are you ok I really loved your story but for some reason the updates have stopped and you haven't even made a single comment in the app since over 9 months ago if you see this just know that it's ok if you don't want to write anymore but could you at least let us know if your ok like still alive
simply op, any other novel with op mc feels nerfed TOO slow paced and weak against this mighty author's op mc ,man they should really learn what op is, from the author here .i cant even seem to continue reading other novels with op mc tags they don't feel like op at all ,i have tried many ,CAN ANY OF U GUYS RECOMMEND ME SOME NOVELS WITH SATISFYING OP MC IF ITS EVEN 50% AS GOOD AS THIS OP AUTHOR'S I WILL PRAY U LIVE TO READ MORE STORIES AS SUCH(just a random soul who wants to read some good op mc stories)
This is **** of a novel. Start was promising, but with more chapters it became ****.No original thoughts. Just anime, film references, etc. No original ideas at all. Im confused how author was even allowed to publish this. Its not even a fanfic, its just "copy paste" and change something. MC is an idiot. He already limited himself by anime **** and films ideas. Whole novel is just bad. Not much description. His system is also bruh. Could have been MUCH BETTER.Power levels also are trash. His ideas trash. Novel trash. Grammar trash. Descriptions trash. Names trash. IQ of battles trash. How the **** pple give it 5*. I won't give it even 1* if I hadn't had to mark update stability. Evrything esle is just lame. Immersion is broken evry fucking time by stupid anime **** and MC. Even demons suck.
I'm looking forward what king of abilities he will have.
