I genuinely enjoyed this story so far. Only had 18 chapters but was very enjoyable to read. Looking foward to new chapters to see what happens next.This story has great potential and is a nice smooth read. Highly recommend so far the first 18 chapters are worth a read.
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I have to say the idea for the novel is really good and interesting enough to pull you in, however I have a list of things that could be improved upon.- First of, excessive technicalities. I get that there are a lot of thoughts behind the magical sides of this novel for world-building's sake, however the made-up technical stuffs feels too much of a filler. Even after reading the 50+ chapters, it feels like I've only read 10 chapters of other novels for how little things has happened. Considering the word count per chapter, the excessive technicalities ended up affecting the story progression.- Next is the MC's character being all over the place. It's like his character is suffering due to forceful attempts for comic relief.During his time on earth before the tutorial, he feels like a goal-driven MC similar to korean MCs of the same novel genre. However when he entered the tutorial, he became more like an arrogant self-entitled chinese MC. I don't know if it's to make him "cool
The first chapter was amazing, I had a different image of MC and the image changed as I kept reading through the chapter. I really like this type of writing, The chapter made me ask questions and I want to find answers. First chapter was enough to convince me that the story has potentials
please continue writing this novel ,it was well made and the plot and pacing is good
ok I used to dislike MCs who were too submissive but for some reason the reasoning he gives behind his actions is something that I as a reader realised after reading tons of novels....good work no arrogant mc but one with a brain...my wronged heart is at peace from the overused cliches in other books... especially...M T L Chinese novels...plz update soon..
This story is just incredible. I love the contents you are creating and the setting, totally awesome. ????❤keep writing ? and l will keep reading
Unrealistic, unreasonable, pretentious and annoying ?this book is so annoying, the main reason why is the female lead. They try to portray her in a good way but girl, I'm not having it.. couldn't explain well but you can read the first 10 chapters and you'll get it.the male lead.. oh my god, he is abnormal. this dude falls completely in love with her after she did a few smart things, and he.. is p e r s i s t e n t.this was a waste of time and s few braincells to me. Peace ✌?
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Level infinityIdiocity infinityMental problem infinityWeak ass crying bitch infinityIf you looking for a interesting story dont look here, this is worse than those virgin mcs in harem. You know hes the most powerfull beying in the universe but foer some reason hes weak as ****,dumb and such.