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Somewhat disliked the second harem member, because because she had played with other men besides her husband before meeting the MC, a bit stupid in my opinion the MC put her in the Harem System with women who easily cheated
The last story with this premise didn't get picked. So here's hoping for it to succeed this time.
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Shameless Author here, I had to give 5 star to my novel XD,
After 15 chapters and 100k views, I thought it's time for me to write one of this.
What to expect from the novel?
lemons - Yes, With some pretty good plot<3
Harem? - Definitely.
System - No, there is none.
Face slapping - Yes..
Politics - Yes, not the whole plot though.
OP Antagonist? - Well we will find that out in the novel.
MC - Although we have some information on Joe, by no means he was an ordinary sect master. we will find that out later.
Action - Not in the beginning.
Romance - Yes, mc is not a maniac and just live to kill.
Different characters - Yes, a lot.
chapter updates - I'm a student so I try to put one chapter daily (not contracted).
World background - This will gradually improve, I plan to write this one, a long and beautiful story in a unique world.(not more than 2k).
Writing Quality - Although English is not my first language, you won't find mistakes that often. (comment if you find one ;) )
Character Design - I try to be as elaborate as possible in terms of the characters. I'll share their art soon.
Discord? - After we have more than 30 members in it's support, Till than follow @asrel_writes321 on Instagram.
Also read my another work "Foretell Of Ascension" I first didn't plan to write this one so soon but I had to take part in WPC so... you get it right.
Atlast, This is technically my second novel. but you can say its my first because I dropped the first novel around 4 chapters.
That's it from my side guys. Stay healthy and have a good day.
-Asrel
~Happy Reading!!
One day, your just minding your own business and you see a piece of candy and you're like " oh! A piece of candy!" And you eat it because you're a badass who does what they want
Eu tô achado a história maravilhosa
Até agora tô amando os personagem
ansiosa pelos próximos capítulos
Do novel gosto muito do novel
É uns dos melhores que já vi
The novel is ok but from what I have read ok is all it is unless they do something big before chapter 40 I can’t see how it would be picked
Because of this Novel...
My eyes are opened!!!!
ALL HAIL FANG YUAN!!!!
OUR BENEVOLENT, MERCIFUL, GENEROUS, KIND, TRUTHFUL AND OUR SAVIOUR...
Fang Yuan..
Hahahah hahahaha. :P
Here's the ACTUAL synopsis of the novel :
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Heaven and earth serves as the common residence of all living things, with time being the constant resident since the dawn of creation.
As with the difference between dreaming and awakening, the distinction between life and death is unpredictable and cannot be determined.
What awaits us beyond time, once we have transcended life and death, heaven and earth?
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Not sure why the Original Synopsis wasn't used and replaced by one that looked like it went through bad MTL, or why it's not translated as Beyond Time as many others did (sounds better than Outside of Time and isn't inaccurate, but anyway....). I imagine the Translator didn't have a hand in it.
Using 3rd-rate synopsis, Outside of Time instead of Beyond Time(but former works too so more of an annoyance than anything) and a very generic Cover picture... can't say this gives a good first impression from the outside, tbh.
A shame, as the content is so far quite good.
Let's see where this goes, our dear site WebNovel... and good luck to the translator.
This is my first time the shop owner almost kill inside his shop, funny right, all i mean novel with a system and selling something inside his shop his almost invisible inside, hahha even though is almost copy with the selling pokemon around the world,, my point here is the host/mc is too weak and the system is weak though, can't even protect mc,
Website : qidian china
Views : 31.07 million
Rating : 7.8(5146)
Chapters : 1261
Status : completed
Word count : 4.10 million
author rank : platinum
Warning to those who have yet to start; Author is unoriginal and repetitive. Multiple major story arcs that happen IN A ROW are all the exact same progression. Even to the point where the interactions in the chapter and pacing of the chapters is the same.
