Interesting Story, but the grammar and English is too broken to read. If the fixed the language and made it readable it would be a good read.
I loved the story, characters, plot. The beginning was great, middle was fantastic. The climax... was where it dropped off. The pacing just went nuts and it really hurt the great things you had set up. So by the ending, the resolution just did not feel rewarding. for one, you developed Aria so well and she became one if the best characters, yet she gets zero screen time in the ending. Not to mention Yvonne. She was turning into a great antagonist but just gets thrown in the background then randomly written off. it's a shame because this story had so much potential and I still loved it. But it just gets extremely rushed to the ending. I look forward to reading more of your stuff and thanks for writing this story.
I love this novel so please don't drop it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
NANI???? The fuuck happened here I was reading it and suddenly all the chapters were gone......... deleted. What happen did the author delete it or webnovel removed it.Psss low rating because of no chapters.
Yo bois, it's another novel by the author of Warlock of the Magus Worldddddddd. Eh, What's this? A carefree MC? Lets see if he can pull this one off as well as he did for Leylin.
Take a long long time, I finally finished reading. The development of the character from being a weak kid who is sensitive to avenge his father. Untill he killed Lin Langthian and became a martial practioner who has rapidly developed his strenght over the younger generation, and he became the strongest in the world who could kill Yimo Emperror that even the Anciant Symbol Master could not be eliminated. This novel teaches the acquaintance to put forth effort to improve themselves and that without effort, great success will not happen.
Good story with disent background ...I hope there will be more details in the future.....with some unexpected twist... rather than some representative stuff....
Interesting but left a lot to be desired. Inwas intrigued by the synopsis of a psychopathic MC but left with a typical Japanese MC with a slight twist of psycho. Of course, he has a quirk of being overly bashful and shy that is typical of Japanese MCs to the point I just roll my eyes. Before the novel starts to charge for the chapters, the MC leaves someone alive for an unknown reason - which I assume it will be “answered away” later- but I found it to be completely unreasonable and frankly just a way for the author to push the plot forward. Pretty weak, imo.Now that is out of the way, I do like the MC and female lead relationship, especially how he helps her with her problem at home. The comedy is pretty good, the other characters have a lot of potential as well. The story seems to have a lot of depth to it possibly, so that is a plus as well. Overall, enjoyed a lot of the novel but annoyed with some other parts of the novel. The writing quality was decent for the most part but there were times of wrong verb usage, funny sentence structure, etc but it did not cause too much of an issue.
this book is good, but the translation is trash, the novel is about a chinese man in china taking the national high school exam, his name is lin yi, the chinese exam is different from the SAT ( SAT is MCQ) but the translator trying so hard to make it seem american, which ruined the story completely.
it's a good and fun read....Deals with transmigrating to parallel world and how the mc changes the world from our/other reality....all in all a good read with not much negative and feel good....Though I feel like the author could have givenc adaptation time and time for him to be a kid and maybe the author can fast forward internet/smartphone to that world and mc releasing songs that won't be in that reality, and how that song influences and reactions of world etc ....well thought this will be fun....anyways keep going and thanks for the chapters author
?????????????Fire Update schedule..keep it comin manStory is going good, more longer chapter please.?????????????
This is a well-written novel. I cannot wait for the next chapter. The author has outdone him/herself. The amount of detail this novel focuses on is just amazing. I did have my doubts but as the story progressed, all dissipated and I started to truly read the novel. I am loving this.