Here we go brand new Adventure!
I have posted the first 50 chapters of the book when I realized the story would be better if I picked a omniscient / third person POV. Let me know what you think.
Amazing plot it was cool to come through the life is this 3 boys.Feels really good when Gujratis are being appreciated for what they are!Overall nice experienceWaiting for the other chapters
book is filled with horror, only a few chapters and and i am already scared.
succha cool story it starts a little slow but nott too much just at the right pace and it keeps it perfectly. the story never goes stale. the hints are nicely dropped and the characters are well written. it is not keeping you on the edge all the time. i really like it
Reading this book like watching anime, I immediately imagine the situation in my head like I watch it. The writing isnt best but the plot is interesting and well build story. Looking forward how the author will develop the story.
Utterly disappointed in this novel, so much wasted potential by grammar and unstable characters. A gender reversal world where the roles reversed but goblins aren't affected and sometimes girls act like their roles aren't reversed.
the story from "Rebirth of the Super Thief" dude wtf....and also some name changing from Rebirth of the Thief who Roamed the World.....................................
"What if you could become the best League of Legends player of all time, overnight? "Cual es la gracia de un personaje que independientemente que tan compleja sea la situación , todo le salga bien.Los defectos son los que construyen al protagonista y si no los tiene el personaje no se siente humano , parece un robot ,un personaje unidimensional.Vamos de las 100k de novelas que tienen que qidian , no pueden encontrar un solo autor que se digne a intentar construir una historia decente ?No hay desarrollo de personajes , literalmente agarra cualquier otra novela de juegos , cámbiale el titulo del juego al del League of Legends y no podrás distinguir las diferencias.
güzel olmadır sanrım hoşuma gidiyo biraz geliştirme olsa fena olmaz daha fantastik mc biraz gelşmesi grek sanırım .. az yazmak istiyom ama neden fzladan yazdırıyonzxdd
This story is intriguing.Review Proper.Writing Quality. It's a smooth read with all the narratives being clear and concise. Though there are a few g-errors here and there but nothing could be fixed by a little proofreading.Stability of Updates. Stable so far.Story Development. Fast-paced yet well-explained. It flows smoothly and it made one dive into the story as they continue to read.Character Design. The characters felt real especially the MC, Long Chen. Even the supporting characters' stories were written well and you could sympathize to them rarely well too.World Background. Since this is a cultivation story, from the items to the way of cultivation, everything is described neatly so far. Overall if you're a fan of Cultivation Story, give this story a try and you would surely like it.
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