The is basically a kid friendly kingdom building novel with no political intrigue or conflict. All the changes he does have no repercussions, conflict, and passes too easily.He introduces modern weaponry without any safeguard to espionage (he increases the budget for internal security and that’s all he did) but nothing gets leaked or stolen. It would had been better to introduce conflict when designs get stolen.He signs modern reform bills left and right like free education and agriculture reforms like he has infinite money and no concerns. There should had been more though put into this or rolled out progressively instead of all at once.There is no political backlash from the conservative faction (if they exist at all) from all the modern reforms rapidly being introduced. The romance feels like a middle school kiss and get pregnant love and very forced and rushed. The new queen is an innocent trophy wife with no character and introduces no drama or plot additions. He also allows her to choose if she wants to reject a political marriage between monarchs and the most advanced nation like it’s a middle school girlfriend breakup. It would had been better if she was a princess of an enemy nation or eastern countries so you have a vehicle to naturally move the plot to other countries with some drama and conflict. Also the pacing between the introduction of the terrorist attacks with the next reattempt is too long and readers don’t care about the terrorist group that killed the parents anymore.Add some conflict and don’t play it too safe.
Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.
The translation is worse than a MTL. Story is pretty basic.
I know where this is heading......
only 1 chapter added?
Sooo excited to read this but I’m gonna wait for moooore chapters.
Really funny book. Laugh through the whole book. Thank you
Anther two short chapters how can I rate
This book is very captivating! I love this writer’s imagination and the story she is creating. Fantastic book!
Seriously good story line but it's too draggy especially the entanglement between couples and the spouses lovers. hopefully author doesn't drag the stories for each couple else the book is a wasted the good efforts.
I really love this book, I’m happy they’ve been together from start to finish!
loved the book but however the ending sucked. you left it without finishing. I hope more comes like more chapters or a second book.