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how can the main character be like that , what the story writer is thinking even if the mc wants money he can't say everything to others like that when they ask , atleast a few secrets should be kept to mc himself . how can he say about the assasination league with that shitty bitch when she asked , does he even had a brain , i don't like the story writer..............
MC sometimes just turns into a drooling retard and let's his enemies live for no reason. Every single time they come back stronger or with more powerful backing to come **** him up. He doesn't learn his lesson. No worries though, he wastes his omni points on some random OP spell that either teleports him away or makes him Thor, either that or he drinks an OP potion that makes him invincible for like 10 seconds before turning him into a waste for a year. No worries tho he makes the dragon queen wet af and she turns him into a dragon, even after he indirectly killed all 3 of her husbands. MC harem members can't have any other potential men in their lives.Oh and MC spends most of his time fucking around instead of actually focusing on getting stronger. Like why are you throwing yourself at these ultra strong demigods with your weak ass magic? MC is portrayed as being really "smart" where only like 3 people can understand him when he talks about magic and his strategies but it just doesn't seem that way when the author forces certain actions in the name of plot, just to end up with massive plot armor for the action part of the story.
Is this book still continuing? Because it is a great story and i would like to see more.
The story is good in my opinion but it needs work. Although it isn't the worst grammar I have seen in a story, it is far from the good either. I suggest the Author go back and fix the errors or get an editor for the story. The editor could be a reader or given by WebNovel because I think they can suggest editors. This isn't social media or a game where grammar doesn't matter much, it is a book/novel where ever errors can change how the story is read and confuse readers like when it kept saying "gun" when the MC was forging a sword and another time a spear.
Can’t believe they dropped a er gen novel. What a waste.Typical of this company to waste such a good novelHappens so often I can’t even muster up disappointment.
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Wish for more frequent uodates but otherwise great to read. Few grammar mistakes and something a little different than other apocalypse stories
Honestly a terrific read so far. Great story development and very good character development. The writing quality itself is the best part. Way too expensive on the privileged chapters though. Still I'll keep reading it from a few chapters back.
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It's an okay story. It starts off kind of crap but then again every webnovel I've read has started off the same way. I'll give it a 3 so far since it does seem to be sort of getting better. Right now though there are definitely better stories to read.