I Become a Big Shot in Showbiz

Many comments try to hype up this novel by saying the novel is good the anime was just a money grab and so many reasons to justify this novel.But the truth is compared to the anime its slightly better and compared to other good novels ,this novel is trash. It can't be considered competition.People are like cultivation + magic +modern setting. But there are so many novels that go in that direction its not unique World building is pretty generic if you have read a bunch of novels.Eg they live in walled cities to protect themselves       people with powers hunt monsters oh aaah Mc doesn't give the feeling of an op mc he's practically lucky in most of his encounters.Mc is dumb in my opinion but he does have a bit common sense and slightly likeable character.Characters are pretty generic too And honestly the magic system isn't even a magic system its just practically using cultivation to control elements (naruto ****)I like how author tries to explain something's in the novel but sometimes he just floods chapters with  useless amounts of  information.Some people also say it  gets better after 150+ chapters but what's the point of reading a novel that can't suck you into the world created by the author in the first few chapters.All in all its the kind of novel for  those starting out or people who just want to waste time but for those who want much better not generic stuff read something else

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if i hoestly have to say anything, its the fact that the test to get into the military was waaaaaaaaaay to drawn out. i like the details, but i feel there are certain things that are focused on to much (ie, some of the notifications from the system are to unnecessarily focused on), especially with the word count per chapter. the chapters are quite short, and a lot of them go into explaining small details, rather than focusing on the main story. i know a lot of people enjoy slow paced novels, and there was a lot of information being divulged, but the entrance test for the military was from chapter 77 to 219 of (from what ive picked up) was only 15ish days long in the story. im not saying thats bad, certain people enjoy the focus on all the minute details, but frankly, it feels like there was a lot of filler, and repeated information. idrc about the characters traits, as those are bound to change with time, and i like to see the end result, but i feel like it would take to much time with that kind of pace. Im not meaning to dog or anything, im just saying theres a lot of filler and repeat information. and unless the pace of the story picks up, theres bound to be a lot of dissatisfaction arrising over time. i havent read past 219, and as i said, there was a lot of information to process, but the fact that its over 200 chapters, and we havent made it off the base planet, is a buzzkill for me so imma just drop it. i hope you still keep going with it, and wish you luck, but as much patience as id like to believe i have, thats way to slow paced for me.

i have read the whole i initial chapters, and believe me when I say I couldn't stop reading it. It was a very interesting concept of story! The right mix of fiction and action in one book! it was amazing. Good job, Author!

Overall a great story. Only thing I urgently request though is that the princess be killed off ASAP. Really too annoying. I’m in the 200’s now and I honestly don’t know why the MC puts up with her. Her presence makes things so complicated for no explainable reason. And she acts way to haughty for no reason. Only leads to mental demons and getting hurt. Really begging and pleading for someone to tell me if she gets killed off or separates cause from the way things are going it doesn’t seem like it. The story is good but then she opens her mouth and I want to delete the story from my library. Good thing the authors writing skills keep me hooked or else I don’t know what I would’ve done.