Anla?! What happened to this?? Was this dropped by the translator. I kinda like this novel hmm.. ? Was looking forward to this since I've started reading it. Can't the QI find another translator for this? And if they're gonna put a novel on the list, can't they find a translator whose goin to finish what they started. They're just goin to put the novel in a bad position in readers. Forcing us readers to read machine trans. novel that's giving us headaches too. ( wow ? such a nag.. LOL✌)BUT.... I was sincere in saying that do not post CTN if the translator is not dedicated on translating/finishing it.All in way.. I'm part of the Leecher Sect so... I just want to show the inner feelings of my bookworm heart ?✌.I just really hope, you can find a new translator to have update on this novel. This novel is kinda the same feels ( slice of life) to JPTLN, 'Commonsense of a Duke's Daughter. About being reborn into another ancient times and using their knowledge from their previous life to better the life they currently have. That is also one of the reason that convince me to read this. If only I know chinese then I would've translated this.. to bad, I can only try my best in editing/PR.P.S. although the translation is quite good, the release is erratic. Maybe because of IRL of the the Translator and translating this was just part of their past time.
The MC is given godlike powers in a Battle Royale and decides to be a good guy, giving away food, helping other people, refusing to use his literal GOD powers to mess with minds because he's afraid of betrayal. I don't know how anyond could be more useless with the powers of a literal god. First thing the MC does is hide in a box when he can literally create or do anything. That should tell you what kind of person the MC is. The author also regularly inserts political opinions, his troops are on the level of natural disasters and he gives them guns seemingly just as an excuse for the author to rant about his view on gun safety and gun control. Trash novel, Chinese MTL ones are better than this garbage.
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What an interesting prologue ! Hmm, some readers who like to read apocalyptic and gore theme, will definitely like this story too. I bet your story will be able to attract many apocalyptic fans. Good work, author !
In the initial three chapters, Jack is depicted as a grandfather who longs for family bonding, but is isolated from them through a series of unfortunate events. The unfortunate events he experienced makes it seem his attachment to his world will fade after the initial shock of being transported. In summary, Jack is a likeable character. Although, the new world background has not been fully introduced yet. However, judging by the quality of the story and the first interaction with the new character from the New World, it will not be disappointing. Something I found interesting is how the main character ends up in awkward situation as soon as he is transported.
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The premise of poverty really validates how Jose and Antonio could let themselves in the pitfall of gambling. You've done a great job in portraying the poorest of the poor of the slums of the Philippines. I hope Allaine won't pursue the rabbit hole that his dad got tangled in. I want to see him strive with honesty and dignity. Just one thing, hospital bills could be paid off by an organization. They simply need to be patient and process the endless amount of paperworks.On the other hand, Antonio and Jose is as equally infuriating as Yanlei. Though Jose was better than Antonio, warning his friend of the possible repercussions. They agreed to Yanlei's terms and did not oppose it. They ought to have stopped while the pit was still shallow. I hope they think about the fate of their families in the event that they sink in a gorge of debt while the status of being poor screams at their conscience. In terms of the technicality in writing, there are some grammar mistakes that I could point out. Don't worry, those are easily proof read. As I always say, enabling yourself to master grammar will able you to produce sentences that will flow smoothly. We all make mistakes, so this is merely a constructive criticism and I hope you take it that way. For my suggestion, I think that you should have an auxiliary chapter for explaining some gambling rules. There are readers who already know it, and there are also those who don't. Hence, for a chapter that focuses on the intense gambling sessions, explaining the rules cut's off the *******.You have a great work here and I'm vouching for the story that you've created! The thrill of gambling is well narrated in every chapter. I'm cheering you on!
Honestly, the beginning was not that catchy but since I really like zombie stories, I decided to give it a chance. As I was reading, I keep thinking about the scenarios I've encountered in other books or movies and can't help comparing them in my mind unintentionally. And now that I have read a few chapters of this novel, all I can say is "not bad" for the writer. Hope you make it better and more interesting by adding more twisted unexpected plots. Good luck. Fighting!
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Over all, it caught my attention. From the contents on each chapter, it was a blast! Keeo up the good work author! It will be a hit someday! Have a good day! ❤❤
author San BRUHHHH this is now one of my favourite overpowered MC novel collection it's tooooooooooo good bruh ?✋ I feel offended by the greatness of it ???????