????????????????????????????Ill be sending you all my loves author...... hope I can send you gift next time ???Your story is good... you deserve all the best
Your writing was not perfect but still understandable so it's not a big deal. U also updated regularly and I liked the idea of your world. The character design seemed well thought but the story development and your pacing still have rooms to improve. Overall, well done and good luck :)
Really exciting novel with a build paving of background in the initial few chapters. The real excitement start from chapter 25 onwards so do give it a shot. Unique storyline set in a real world. Truly worthy of a five star review.The world background is realistic, with proper character developments and interaction .Not the usual weak-to-strong, sad back childhood cultivation cliches. The MC has a proper human potential, facing realistic difficulties.
Beautiful work… I am hooked
nice book..... love to read more
love this book I wish you would finish soon
This novel is amazing but I can’t read the rest
Amazing book...️
am beginning to think the chapters are getting shorter ......
nice book... intriguing
more chapters please
I loved it!