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What a great story! Great characters, I'm hooked so far, thank you for your work amazing lady. I hope we'll see the rest of this masterpiece soon. I feel so good, I feel happy. This story became the happiest part of my life! But please for diversity sake, include more Iberian people. Thanks for your hard work!
This is one of the good kingdom building novels I have read it's amazing in that the mc start from scratch with nothing but a title in a desolate place, its interesting to see his progress and the realization of how he can lose everything with a single mistake in judgment. This novel puts in two of the best elements of fantasy fiction which are kingdom building and systems, this novel won't disappoint anyone who tries it.
I'll just say one thing "Thanks, because this is the only type of fictional character I always desired..the perfect story and the perfect lead..it's such a great pleasure reading this again and again..thanks for this masterpiece"??
?????Hello author-nim! I am here with a seriously thought out review, as I believe it is given time I review the story. This story is probably one of my favorites. Although this story is one of my favorites, I will not just give a brainless review with 5-stars. This review consists of my real views and tips/advice on how this story could be improved for future readers reading experiences. ??????? ℚ??????In my opinion the author's grammar, punctuation and word forming could be greatly improved. A lot of sentences are either missing words or worded terribly. Sometimes irrelevant sentences are put together instead of being seperated with a full stop. Originally I was going to give a 3-star for writing quality. However, because it wasn't completely unreadable, I gave it a 4-star. ????? ???????????For story development, I decided to rate it a 5-star. So far, from what I have read. The story development is good, it isn't too fast paced and it explains quite a few things. It shows the main character's process of returning to the same power of his previous life. The storyline/plot is very interesting and entertaining. I thoroughly enjoyed read this story so far.ℂ???????? ??????Character design, 2-star! Why? 1. There was almost no introduction to the main character at the beginning of the story. 2. Barely any explanation was made about his past life and history/background. 3. It was also unclear whether his name was the same as his current life in the past (I had to clarify with the author on this topic). ???????? ?????????I give the updating stability a 5-star. The author updates quite often. Most of the time 2 chapters are uploaded in one update. I am very satisfied with the upload times and chapters.????? ??????????World background is fairly decent. Although not much is explained in the beginning. I let it slide as the world background is later explained in more detail. 4-stars for world background.?????Hopefully author-nim doesn't find this review too harsh...(• ▽ •;)????? ℝ?????4-stars
it's like author made frame of story then started writing and connecting plots forcelyyou will not see any emotions, if you want power mc who only go and defeat villains in one strike an pick up girls like picking stones then its for youi read chapter upto 71
Another story in the vein of MC who doesn't cultivate normally but is still strong as heck. At this point he levels up using game-mechanics but somehow that makes him have some sword superpower that's not clearly defined. That said, I do like the ghosts aspect and hope there is more of this. There's also a bit of lewd humor underneath that's a nice touch.
If QI is going to steal other translators works at least steal good stories. DE is insanely repetitive, it goes on a seemingly never ending cycle of enemies and encounters so similar to each other that they start to blend into each becoming a blur of pixels. The only saving grace to this is that the MC is completely one dimensional, and even experiences some limited character development. Seriously though QI unsavory actions aside this webnovel is really bad I dropped it about 800 chapters in and don't regret it.
Read the mtlI get boring the further you read in the novelplot just repeats itself ............................................................
I’m loving it. However I do agree with many other reviews, the system holds his hand a little to much. I understood at the beginning however he got his own land to build a factory like 100-200 chapters ago and still has yet to do it, just relies on the system. We have yet to see the “Genius Weapon Designer”. Im still enjoying it very much though and hope it doesn’t get dropped. Anyways you release chapter pretty much everyday so keep up the hard work. Needs some work but overall is a great story.
I read the raws, it's apparently a transmigration novel(oh my what a suprise). A boy named Su Yu died in a plane crash and found himself crossing to a world called Shenyue. The original owner was a student of Wuzong Academy in the "mainland" don't know what that means. But yeah it's a Transmigration/Weak to Strong and possibly a romance? I think i've read about him talking about a girl or something. I haven't gone far in the raws. Just checked what's it about because of that sypnosis -.-
Didn't find too many mistakes, the story is addicting and gets you hooked easily.It's about a fatty who does game testing for a living while part-time streaming,He got into game testing after getting fired (he got bullied there --> it's something that reflects on his personality).Apocalypse started when he accepted the invitation from a mysterious game company to beta test their new game "World Simulation". From what I understood, it's a game about surviving at the end of the world.What's most interesting about becoming a beta tester for this game is that reality starts becoming more and more like game (the game has real time feature, bug fixing).In conclusion, from the 20 chapters that are out, I rate this novel as a 4.4 with 4 in writing quality (didn't see any gramatical erros, but english is not my native language so what do I know), 5 in stability of updates (2-3 chaps a day), 4 in Story Development (didn't give it a 5 since I don't exactly know how it will develop), 4 in Character Design (the characters feel real, but I'm a loner so don't trust my word for it), 5 in World Background (don't know why I gave it a 5, just move on to other reviews or start reading the book).