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i can tell from the start that this has good potential and I really hope that you bring it a long way. you can't really find the good eat and evolve style novels.
Shameless self-review. (Let's be honest, almost all authors do it.) I started posting this story as a way to practice my writing and gain more confidence. I never thought it would place second in a WPC. I actually think the plot and story are pretty decent, my only problem would be the grammatical errors (English is not my native language.), but I will try to correct them if you let me know. I accept any criticism, comment or suggestion that can help me to improve as an author.So don't hesitate to tell me your opinions, even if they are a bit harsh.Thanks for reading, I hope I can continue writing this story until the end.
pretty interesting :)
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This review is my honest opinion as I felt about it while reading it. DO NOT judge this novel from my review and I will recommend reading few chapters before you judge it.That said, here's my review for the author.Concept was great and kinda not boring. Early chapters was great. However once the girlfriend was introduced, it became the flowery speech contest where both of them start speaking like some poets with increasingly cringe worthy lines. Taf will always start speaking in jargon which will test the limits of your patience especially if May is around. I read till around chapter 80 after which I just couldn't carry on. In my opinion, once a while is ok but the current amount is just unbearable Short chapters-I could skip 10 chapters and still guess what happened before. My opinion: either increase chapter size or story paceStory-One thing I always hated in novels is how the part of the so called grand destiny is revealed super early in the novel. I already know that they are in the lower planes.. the sect that they supposedly going to is super weak.. their country is weak.. There is a plane of gods from where the draconian(mc grandma character) came from. All these points should be slowly revealed in due time.My opinion: future plot should be revealed over a period of time. That dream was unnecessary. The trial could have been handled in a more better way.
I seldom make a review but I think it deserve it. To those stupid people that mc is a coward and weak how low your logic can u be. A man that live in peace time is transported to another world and u think he will be like a man with a killer personality. I think this is the most realistic transported reaction in all novels I have read. He needs a special skill for clearing his mind with killing heck he even has ptsd after his first kill of a man. In the real world you will have ptsd or nightmare after killing except you're a psychopath which I'm assuming you guys are because u think you'll be fine and brave if you're transported from your home to a jungle with killer bunnies. To all of guys that is in the edge if you want to read this or not then I hope this helps. MC here is not a pussy beta male that being push around and he's also not a alpha kill the shit that doesn't give me face. He's a normal human like me or you that doesn't even know why face in cultivation is so important sorry for the rant
Great story, with character development and quite interesting plot. Although it really REALLY need a characters index and a glossary with the general information of the world, the different ranks of artifacts, cultivation, etc.
Does he stay with his monster look forever? ......................................…........................................................
I spammed a bunch of 5 stars earlier, so this should be fine. Author. Don't you dare get Alvelyn with Loyd. I still remember all the BS he pulled, although Allevian doesn't. Or maybe he does, not sure
Very much engaging to the readers. The vocabulary is very captivating, Every detail in the novel was fun to read. The novel is very much never-wreaking as it is a very qualitative.