In a rift faraway from any intervention a fox wake up in a forest with a million different faces. Then the forests masks begin to crack and the rift begins to shift.
Obligatory Author’s review. This book is a rewrite for my COPYCAT series. Please comment your critiques and help me improve my writing. Thank you! And ENJOY!
This review is my honest opinion as I felt about it while reading it. DO NOT judge this novel from my review and I will recommend reading few chapters before you judge it.That said, here's my review for the author.Concept was great and kinda not boring. Early chapters was great. However once the girlfriend was introduced, it became the flowery speech contest where both of them start speaking like some poets with increasingly cringe worthy lines. Taf will always start speaking in jargon which will test the limits of your patience especially if May is around. I read till around chapter 80 after which I just couldn't carry on. In my opinion, once a while is ok but the current amount is just unbearable Short chapters-I could skip 10 chapters and still guess what happened before. My opinion: either increase chapter size or story paceStory-One thing I always hated in novels is how the part of the so called grand destiny is revealed super early in the novel. I already know that they are in the lower planes.. the sect that they supposedly going to is super weak.. their country is weak.. There is a plane of gods from where the draconian(mc grandma character) came from. All these points should be slowly revealed in due time.My opinion: future plot should be revealed over a period of time. That dream was unnecessary. The trial could have been handled in a more better way.
As the tears continuously fell down her cheeks, with his warmth all around her skin and his hands gently caressing her back to calm her down, Ysabelle was only thinking of one thing.
