Fed to the rules and I hit the ground running
Didn't make sense not to live for fun
And all that glitters is gold
Your brain gets smart but your head gets dumb
Hey now, you're an all-star, get your game on, go play
Only shooting stars
I could use a little fuel myself
Hey now, you're a rock star, get the show on, get paid
Let's talk about Su Ci's voice because WOW. "I have the final say." Four words. Four. And Lu Xiangbei's entire worldview cracked. The author writes: "No dust rose—But they left him... shifting between red and pale." That's not just dialogue, that's a weapon. What I love is how Su Ci NEVER raises her voice. Not once. While the kids are screaming, spitting, charging at her—she's fanning her perfume sachet. She puts on sunglasses indoors. She says things like "What? Want to give me a massage?" with total casualness. Her dialogue is lazy, almost bored, which makes it infinitely more powerful. She's not trying to dominate them—she's already won and she knows it. Compare that to Lu Xiangbei's voice: "Get out!" "This is my brother's home!" "A woman like you isn't qualified!" His dialogue is all noise and fury, mid-puberty voice cracking, spit flying. He's trying so hard and it's almost tragic because we know he's already lost. And the neighbor! "Which house is cooking meat?!" "How much soy sauce did they use?! What a waste!" This side character gets THREE LINES and I can hear her voice perfectly. That's good writing. The narrative voice itself is also worth noting—it's snappy, occasionally sarcastic, and never takes itself too seriously. When Su Ci thinks "If there is—then use two," referring to money solving problems, the narration just... agrees. It's on her team.
Sun - you look cute .
Wisdom: 109
Anyway. William began to walk toward the small cabin that was not far away from where he was now. He came here because he needed to register before he could enter the Training Ground. What should he gonna do is quite simple. Just need to write down his name and sign it after that.