Starting from Fan Clan arc or close to it author or translator loses his or her english and creates their own language writing wasn't perfect to begin with but since the Long Clan and Fan Clan arc it hit the all time low. Feels like author was lazy to construct a sentence just and threw some random words to fill in
The start of the novel was quite good and funny, but after he went to the Poison sect and became the head of the sect he started killing cultivators indiscriminately for the sake of obtaining points. All of this while having 100 initial chapters and the title of the novel about breaking trough too fast
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I must say it's been awesome reading this novel. Yes the story is slow developing but it has alot of potential. No step sister, cheating boyfriend, it's just going from a bad relationship to a good relationship.
very idiotic story with no element of reality. Those foolish readers who think the mc is awesome or something let me tell you a fact: if this sort of mc exists in real life then that person will be drowned in spit by everyone he meets.
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Story development was slightly faster than I preferred, other than that, the wasy the autor described the characters and his world building was honestly some of the best I’ve read in a while. 9/10 would recommend.
Cool book, there are just some small writing errors but overall, it's good. Good luck author. Waiting for more chapters............................................
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Didn’t actually read much from that genre, but imo it’s well written and shows why and how things are happening. How he grows into who he will be. Just read until chapter 3, but it’s seems promising.