Good premise for a story. OP does his homework, this much is obvious.That being said, this story is in need of context. I feel like I get 60% of the story... I want the other 40% that is trapped in OPs head.
nice work azakoth , quite interesting story hope you keep writing this book
Omg, this book is more entertaining than any other I've read recently on this platform. It's so funny with surprises in every turn of the page. Just take my money!!!!
Hey dude your missing the tattoo artist in your harem list just now noticed during the re read. Also check your author comments. I left you a comment.
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My father then spoke, "You two have known each other for many years. I would think you know each other well by now."
Never! Never! Never! Never! Never!
*Puerta abriendose*
- Fuuuu! Finally! - He sighed in relief after his victory - She was persistent, but this battle was so easy! The latter had been much more complicated than this.
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"Perfect" I said with a smirk on my face .