I like the idea . I think I'll enjoy this. I will return to update my review either good or bad in the future right now this is my encouragement to the author to see a continue writing this book since usually these type of novels make the protagonist 90% of the time as a warrior it isn't t bad but it is over done that it's become boring so seeing a puppeteer is something new and interesting, plus I wish you not to limit your imagination, you can make his string uses more than just controlling puppets make it also a weapon like the string string fruit from one piece and make him able to create his own puppet from wood or metal whatever please don’t make him use human corpses because it’s disgusting
I'm only here for the FP reward.Good luck with the book.
Realy enjoyed the style of the first chapter, keep doing good work. Gona look for the rest later on but it feels realy promising. Dam word limits, feel like i should already know the whole book to just share first read feelings ???
Basically this story is like an alternate history or alternate universe itself.Imagine this - you are reborn in another world where everything's an AU, a parallel world itself and there are different versions of the historical figures (Why not also have an OCs too?)For example, that world's Jose Rizal is alive. He's a doctor here and one of the ministers. There's no Katipunan.While there are plenty much to see here for this AU Philippines story, I think author should create or use more OCs whenever possible because it is an AU story itself and that the geopolitical climate there is highly and likely different.
Okay. It's just six chapters, waiting for more to be released. But I am intrigued. Selene is totally different from what I expected. Heck, the first chapter is way different from what I expected. I really look forward to this book and can't wait for more chapters.
Its fine, keep the flow of the story just like this with stable development.
At first I didn’t think this novel was all that because it just simply wasn’t that interesting at the start, but after like 40 chapters it starts to get really good and you really get a sense of how bad@as the main character is. And all the cool powers and abilities start getting introduced. I definitely recommend this novel if you like an OP and just cool mc
I really love this book Just a few chapters and I'm hooked already ?.Really cool ?Keep it up Dakutsuki
Hello author! I'm leaving a review. The story is good and interesting. The humor is also on point and I already like the two idiots. The only problem is that, you sometimes go too far in your paragraphs, making them long. And sometimes, it feels rigid, like AI. Maybe you use ai for grammar checks but apart from that, this book is very good. I'm new on Webnovel and this is one of my first reads and I must say, I'm very impressed. Good luck
it is a good story to read and I promise you won't regret it
hey u wote a wonderful novel here but I'm wondering if you plan to finish 'I got reincarnated as a kobold.'
The concept of the story is pretty good. However, there are many grammar and wording issues in every chapter. There is also a lack of consistency and realism. A character can't be made out to be disgusted and terrified of a dead animal and then be an experienced hunter who is used to breaking such animals down. It also doesn't make sense to be capable of dissecting and breaking down an animal with no tools whatsoever.