Review time!The author has a strong voice throughout the story, and the protagonist definitely comes across as having a troubled past. Plot-wise, starting in the middle allowed for opening up to some pretty intense action, and sets up a nice and deep exploration of the main character. I think there's great potential for a character-driven exploration of the themes and politics that put the protagonist in such a terrible situation.On the technical side, there are mostly some issues with tense-case and a few misspellings, but nothing a good round of editing won't fix. Some of the dialogue can get a little confusing without indicators of who is speaking, and the extra space could be used to add little actions, facial expressions, etc.Overall I would say that the character interactions are great, but the dialogue can be a little anime-esque in terms of sudden dramatic increase.A solid start, and I'm sure once Nekoman finds his feet, it'll be off to the races.
Unfortunately, Chief Kim nodded to her and passed her a folder, "Yes, all of them. They need to be correctly archived as well. You can take your time with them."
"I'm already in too deep, I cannot back out now" Scott said with serious expression.
I saw hey potato comment on this and I had to check it out(, I love her/his work so much) nice book Please speed up your update rate,I would love to read it till the end???
First, short chapters and a lot of filler.Second, in this story EVERYONE is a good person, NO ONE has bad intentions. It's not realistic.Third, MC divulges his secrets to everyone.130+ chapters and it's been less than 2 months.MC is too naive, too kind.When MC goes on a trip with companions, their names are NEVER mentioned.
It starts good. But the more you read, the more you see the mc got pushed around by the mom. And too many chapter talking about side character that the author doesnt even create. This novel isnt worth reading even if it's not premium. The premise really good tho. And the starting chapter looks promising. But you better spend those ss somewhere else
Bawa iss story ka protagonist mota hi khedii h.TL :- The protagonist in this story is extremely Amazing.Comedy, Action, suspense, thriller, this is one of the best work that i have red so far. I would suggest everyone to read this. At least try out the first volume. You won't regret it. I can promise you that.
Amazing novel keep up the good work.. No harem please also try getting someone to proofread for you.............................................................................................................................. ......
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I really liked the description. I think the author did an excellent job in describing the scenes and all.Highly recommend!!Great job author!!!