This story is not for those who enjoy a fast paced, guilty pleasure harem novel, and skip from novel to novel to find anything to gawk at for having a ‘badass, cold and ruthless’ MC, who is just a kid trying to look cool in reality.Translation Quality: 3/5There are a lot of grammar and spelling mistakes, it is fine now, but it is still prevalent in the earlier chapters.Stability of Updates: 5/52 chapters a day since day 1, with not a single minute of delay throughout.Story Development: 5/5Those who enjoy fast-paced novels won’t be a big fan of this. This novel is the most well thought out novel on qidian by a long shot. The author isn’t scared to take his time, and it is AMAZING!!! The MC can’t cultivate at the start, only at chapter 1?? can he do so, but as a fan of cultivation stories, this story has BY FAR THE BEST START OF A NOVEL and IT’S QUALITY DOES THE OPPOSITE OF DECLINING.Character Design: 5/5BEST CHARACTERS ON QIDIAN, you could pick any random character from this story, and make a novel on them that would be a big hit. They all feel so realistic and fleshed out, that you can’t help but wonder in awe in how the author wrote them so well. The MC is amazing, and DESPITE HAVING SUCH DETAILED AND REALISTIC CHARACTERS, YOU STILL FEEL HE IS THE MOST INTERESTING.World Background: 5/5Phenomenal. The world has a clear and rich history better than any other. The history feels like a real history that could happen in our world, except a few people have some small powers. Not much to say, just brilliant.
Great continuation from first book Spirit Cultivation, but after the girls meet up with MC, release rate plummets and now the novel is pretty much dead as author seems to lose any direction or passion for finishing the story. I recommend you just wait until he gets back into the groove and starts writing regularly, otherwise you’ll be left hanging.Great story, characters, world, etc but release rate sucks a lot
I've seen some story like this but still like it, always interesting read this kind of novel ................................................
Deleted it from my library so many locked chapters with no ad options. No thank youSkip it and find something else story is generic enough that you won’t even remember it after a week of not reading it
Its a very fun novel The world building is amazingThe charachter all have distinct personalities The main character does not make me want to kill myselfOverall pretty darn good
The story is very generic. While the translations are decent the story and character devolopment is lacking. The world building is also quite generic as I've read many novel with a similar setting
Can’t be bothered to continue after reading how pretentious he becomes. What the heck is with getting a zero on the test on purpose for absolutely no reason for.
it's a really good read. I like how the characters developed and relationship development, however the system is really a little stingy and has little involvement in the novel
Is very interesting, the story is amazing and I can not stop reading as I want to know what happens next. is very well detailed and lets you imagine and feel like you are in the story. keep up the good work, Author. I'm rooting for you.
There is not much to say to my own book so thanks for reading my book and this senseless comment. İf you found a mistake or want to give your advice, that would be great for me. This is my first writing a book/novel so every help counted
Even if I don't like system novels that much, this one is keeping me hooked into it!I'm curious about what's gonna happen next!
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