I've finished it!!!!!!!!!!467 chapters of fun!!!!The finale though was very rushed, well I think the whole novel was fast...Still couldn't believe when I read the last chapter title that said finale, I thought it's the final thing of something but it's the final chapter of the white or novel...Highly recommend this one, if you like the straight kind of novels with not so many cliche twists, this novel is a good read...
Great book love it. Can’t wait for mc to do his duty and repopulate the world lol he probably can only give birth the females but of course great. Only wish you don’t drop this and continue to write with passion it can really become in the top 50 and above if you keep going.
The story is totally different from the title. Description is great but novel disappointed me as it is not even close to the Title or Description.
I was initially interested in this novel, and I read to chapter 182. I enjoy reading slice of life system novels. However, this novel took a very weird turn.When the main character first got the system, the system told him that there wouldn't force him to do anything dangerous. However, all of a sudden there is now a life or death competition against other system holders? Wasn't this supposed to be a slice of life pet store novel? Why did it change so fast?Normally I wouldn't care all that much about this competition, but the problem is the main character literally has no reason nor motivation to participate in this. The only reason he is the owner of a pet shop is because his parents died, and so he wanted to take over. The reason the main character started capturing this mystical pets is basically, "why not?".Anyway, this story is pretty slow. The main character focuses on the mystical pets he has 100% of the time, why is kinda disappointing for a pet store owner that has 10 - 30 pets and only focusing on three of them. (So far) Normally in a story like this, you'd expect a lot of cute moments, because well, the main character owns a pet store. However, those are far and wide, nowhere to be seen. The story is extremely slow and repetitive, to the point of annoyance. However, this novel does have some good comedy. Like when the main character implied communism would be a good idea. The translation quality of this novel is pretty mid. Everything is understandable, but they randomly change the names of various characters/pets. It's extremely confusing because they literally have two different names for a character in a single chapter.Overall, the novel is decent, but the fact that the author drones on and on about random stuff really makes this novel too slow to bear. I am unsure why they put a action-plot in a slice of life novel, but whatever.
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Really good novel.Thought you should use GRAMMARLY to correct some of your errors. They are mostly missing words and confusion like between It's, it is
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It kinda starts slow but it gets better, as author said it picks up at chapter 16. Though the update stability is kinda slow, thought I can understand since ur a student. The writing quality is really good.Description of things, buildings and the environment is also good.The fight scenes is the ones that I mostly enjoy, that’s why I read action novels. Keep up the work tho:). Looking forward for future chapters.
I love this I am looking forward to new chapters ???????
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Really enjoying this story! The action and horror scenes are gripping and intense, the prose flows nicely. The descriptions are vivid and you can picture yourself in the scene. The characters are interesting and three dimensional. Keep up the good work! Looking forward to reading more.
If I had to be fully honest the first 20 chapters of this novel were great.But then it started to go down hill from there. First point is It was going so well but sadly the author cripple his ability, so now he could only shoot 5 that are guaranteed to go in.but he got it later.I get your trying to get him to realise his aragance and put some drama in the mix.But the drama was too much the mcs personality was absolutley and uterly atrocious.He loves a girl has 2 kids with her.comes back in time cheats with her three times.Takes her virginity,then when he has sex with her and shes resting ontop of him.That stupid charachter ivy starts having sex and he's too f***ing afraid to stop it because he might wake her up.what utter bull*****.And I really started to like the story to but that whole fiasco really dident make any sense .He hasent even gotten his third yet.It would make more sense to have unlocked it then before the crash had happened.but gets it when he randomplays with his brother.Also what was the point in adding aluka in the first place now.so to face slap her in the future to show her what she missed.(wich is exactly what happened.)Then with sandra his past wife.He dident even fight for her to be by his side and let' her be.He should have know what her personality was like and what she went thru yet he knows nothing.But what I can complement is the story settings and how he has risen so far up until now.tho he wasent able save his mother that dident bring him down for long and even motivated him to do the best for his family,and for himself.This is only my view of the story.But for others it may be an amazing story.And I won't argue with you on that.This is just my review of the 50 chapters so far.But don't be discuroged.Not to read it because of this review because you may very well like the story.Tiger out.