it says 164 chpts but can only get to like 138. hasnt updated in like a month but has more chapters already writen and locked? please free them for us to enjoy!!
Wow, the story is captivating from the start! It feels like you are really inside his world. Kudos to the author. You nailed it! Can't wait for Luke to achieve his goals. ??
Very funny and ass kicking especially when those old idiots when the trap that set for him turn back against them and can believe that they got play by a little kid
From now on i'm writing the novel slower because i've seen my quality of my work it sucks balls.................................!!!!!!!!!@!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
now while there are inconsistencies in the first couple of chapters I can overlook them and while the writing is a little awkward , but since english is not his language I can also understand this I don't like the nerfing but it's not bad overall a fun novel to read I just hope the author improved in the latest chapters
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Yah there's potential here, and you can tell it was definitely inspired by "mushoko tensei" which isn't a bad thing, that's how most stories are made. However I just can't, get with the pacing. It goes by 1 year, 2 year, "after three years of doing dah, dah, dah; I have yet to improve. Don't think it to be boring to explain what happens in those couple years. This builds the word around us and let's us get to know the characters struggle.
I’ve read to chapter 77 so far and I’m loving it. The MC is actually a villain unlike the majority of novels with the villain tag. He only cares about himself, as we see early on in the story. Personally I’m glad the author did a few time skips because I didn’t want the whole story with him being a child. Anyways, when I get paid next week I’m definitely buying the rest of the chapters. Also for anyone reading and wondering if there is romance, so far there is not. I also believe the author said if there is then it won’t be a harem. Anyways great job author. Hope this doesn’t get dropped.
Forced plot, cringe anime-esque dialogue every now and then, characters somehow just as strong as the MC for no logical reason, hero complex MCIf those havent turned you away, you’ve got no hope. This novel looks appealing at first with its world building and then it slaps you in the face around chapter 50 with a sudden change to a hero complex MC who starts acting like a complete idiot. Everyone around him suddenly becomes super powerful despite being literal cannon fodder. Everything the MC goes through in terms if challenges are just useless. The MC is not strong mentally or physcially. He can be overwhelmed by two white/blue trial randoms and manipulated but some businessman.Such a disappointment.
We know next to nothing about the Character and World Background.The translation is decent but this novel has the usual "young master" syndrome problem.Every 1-2 chapter has the usual spectator that needs to say negative comments about the main character just for him to "shine brighter" and the usual face slapping that always appears.
I absolutely love this novel. My sole complaint is that there isn't more to read. Alas, all good things must come to an end. ~~an avid fan.
Rating my own book 5 stars because I can. I am going to keep writing random stuff after I have already written my point just to make the word limit so that I can post this review