Very good story, really impressed by the way you explained things. I was really impressed by your writing and absolutely want future updates of this work.
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Great story please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Hmm. This story has an interesting read. Someone who becomes a sword, I can't wait to see how he will live his life. The mc too has an interesting character and can be fleshen up more. The introduction of the world background is also written well. The narratives too is easy portrayed to the readers.Writing quality, there are grammatical errors though it didn't much hinder you to enjoy reading this but you could still improve it. Overall, this book has a great and interesting start. I love to see this one grow more chapters and a must keep in my collections. And if you are a fan of transmigration and cultivation stories, then this one is definitely recommended.Keep it up author!
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I'm on board with a story if their mc has lighting powers. Always been a fan of it. Having an mc that's a different nationality other than Asian is a bonus. Webnovel needs more diversity. If you see the author see this, keep up the good work!
It started out p good until the mc gets reincarnated in a different world (for the second time). Then it drops off, also the system is annoying asf like fr It shocks him taking out health whenever it doesn't like what he is doing. After saying all that though, I would say that the writing quality is good and some ppl might enjoy the plot, so good luck author, however I don't think I will continue reading this.
didn't really like the novel felt everything moving at a slow pace and some weird impractical things happening every now and then overall i wasn't impressed but its not the worst novel i read its just bland because of how many novels i have read that start exactly the same way
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This story is hurt by poor grammar. There is a kernal of something interesting underneath, but it is difficult to get at it. The character seems very one-dimensional, so we're not really rooting for him so much as just sitting back and watching.
Full of Taoist Style. This is a good story with philosophy of life. It's show the different attitude and belief through the characters. Personally, I like this style of story. But some reader which taste prefer Fantasy-action-advanture may not like it. Cause, the story rhythm are slowly flow no hast nor delay like water.