The minion of the evil god confesses his love to the young lady.

If I had to be fully honest the first 20 chapters of this novel were great.But then it started to go down hill from there. First point is It was going so well but sadly the author cripple his ability, so now he could only shoot 5 that are guaranteed to go in.but he got it later.I get your trying to get him to realise his aragance and put some drama in the mix.But the drama was too much the mcs personality was absolutley and uterly atrocious.He loves a girl has 2 kids with her.comes back in time cheats with her three times.Takes her virginity,then when he has sex with her and shes resting ontop of him.That stupid charachter ivy starts having sex and he's too f***ing afraid to stop it because he might wake her up.what utter bull*****.And I really started to like the story to but that whole fiasco really dident make any sense .He hasent even gotten his third yet.It would make more sense to have unlocked it then before the crash had happened.but gets it when he randomplays with his brother.Also what was the point in adding aluka in the first place now.so to face slap her in the future to show her what she missed.(wich is exactly what happened.)Then with sandra his past wife.He dident even fight for her to be by his side and let' her be.He should have know what her personality was like and what she went thru yet he knows nothing.But what I can complement is the story settings and how he has risen so far up until now.tho he wasent able save his mother that dident bring him down for long and even motivated him to do the best for his family,and for himself.This is only my view of the story.But for others it may be an amazing story.And I won't argue with you on that.This is just my review of the 50 chapters so far.But don't be discuroged.Not to read it because of this review because you may very well like the story.Tiger out.

This story is totally uninspired and not worth reading in my opinion. I read the first 60 chapters and so far it's all been incredibly generic. The chapters are short, the characters are one dimentional and have no depth, the plot only exists to serve the main character.The author is writjng 2 books at once and publishing 4 chapters a day and it shows in the writing. entire chapters of this book can be summed up in 1 line and everything is so drawn out for no reason. you just can't write a proper story if you're forcing 4 chapters a day.

I don't like this novel. MC has a degree in administration, applies to be a fitness coach...why?Plans on quitting his job. Saves a girl from a coworker who was going to assault her. Girl ask if he could be a witness for the incident and report it to the police, refuses...tf. "why?""...for the clubs reputation"I stopped reading after that.

This is a great and interesting story. The main character is cool and intelligent. He makes his decisions based on whether or not it is beneficial not useless garbage like morals. If you like the book “The Legendary Mechanic” you will probably like this. Although the MC isn’t quite as hard working as Black Star, it is refreshing to see an MC that also manages to enjoy the benefits of the situation they were given. - DaoistHeavenlyEgg

review after ch 26.I really enjoyed this story. I wasn't expecting such a story on webnovel, as most stories about villain, hero, isekai tags have many cliche tropes. But this one is really different. After each chapter, I can't imagine what will happen in next chapter here, as this story doesn't has any usual Chinese cliches. Also, the writing style of author is really unique. All the characters till now are 18 year old kids. And 18 year people are kids only, but Chinese novels either show them as super smart adultlike, or braindead courting death type villains. But in this story, all 18 year olds are shown like that only. Some are incredibly naive, like edward, some are anxious type who are afraid of speaking in public, some are hot headed, while one invites a friend for first time in her house, and goes running from one room to another.. I really liked the writing style, and I believe this story can be excellent for stage plays, but maybe not so good for converting to manhwa.Author keep up the good work

it better then most