I was expecting this book to take off. it certainly has rough start. and there were parts that could ve been handled better. but the story contains so much potential. giving 1 star for updating stability coz the book's not been updated for quite a while now.
this actually has a good idea, but there are still some shortcomings that need to be improved such as the storyline and the depiction of the world's background in this novel.
Truly one of a kind. I must say for those who are reading or considering to read this novel. Don't let yourself be affected by the negative comments. Take your time to understand it and judge whether it is good or bad yourself. As for the discrepancy stated in the comments, I think the discrepancies are either insignificant or misunderstood. So don't sweat the small stuff.
Nyah i sense a shameless mc nyahh..i sense a scoundrel nyah..i hope this would be good...waiting for 100+chapa nyahhhhahahahahah nya nyahLets Spread the Nyahhhhh~
HMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM...................a type of novel where every cliches get mix up BUT!!!! with good execution and not so fast pace
Let’s just cut the balls off of cucks they don’t need them
while I thinks this books is good so far but there is a big jump in the store from chapter 16 to 17 and I feel like there miss parts of the store that hold info we need
i love the new kind of novels in this seems amazing so far.
Спасибо за отличную историю. Очень приятный текст, к сожалению Английский язык не знаю, но воспользовавшись Google translate получил весьма хороший текст. Замечательные персонажи и хороший юмор делают это произведение превосходным. Очень сожалею что последняя глава вышла аж 3 года назад, что значит что продолжение врятле будет, жаль(
I loved this novel and I’m pretty sure the author died so I’m going to make this a dnd campaign hey author dude if your still alive can I have your blessing to make this a dnd campaign?
MC is beta and wimp,.....,.................
Alright since the novel will hit 100 chapters soon, this is a good time to clear up some things for new readers. Firstly the romance bit of this story doesn't start until a very long time, hell even in the current chapters ( Chapter 98 right now ) it still hasn't started. I didn't want the story to revolve around the romance until at least the end of the prologue arcs, because yes the first four arcs are really just prologue arcs. A lot of things happened but it's not the actual story yet. I know 100 chapters of prologue seems long, but stuff do happen so it's not like 100 chapters of just nothing. It's 100 chapters of worldbuilding, characters presentation and a bit of developpement. I think many will consider that the true story already started, but I am being hard with my own story and consider that the four first arcs are really bad compared to what is coming. Also I wanted to, as I already said, clear some things up. The MC is not a good person overall, he may seem like one but he really ain't. Imagine as a villain who still has a heart and didn't lose all of his humanity. Also the MC is not the only important character in this story, it focuses on a lot of other characters and everyone who is named in the story can become immensely important later on. To finish this I'll say that if you're looking for a basic cultivation story, don't read this. I don't know what my readers think of it, but I personally feel like my novel doesn't have a great cultivation part and only takes some ideas from other eastern fantasy novels. the cultivation part to me is bad, the other parts should be good. But if you want face slapping young masters, hiding your power to shock everyone repeatedly and long paragraphs to describe how the mc is cultivating...This ain't the good place.