Thie novel reminds me of legendary mechanic but I pove the concept of commanders. Overall just a unique concept and good read. Keep updating and ill keep reading author
To be honest, nothing worthy of reading except for cliche stuff i could arrange in my head. And what about the bot review spam for 5 star, this is overrated novel, i would say.
This Guy Takes The First Time Of His Step-Sister. The Description Of The Aftersex Is Too Good. It Makes Me Wanna Have Sex Too. Though I'm Always Wanting It. Afterall We All Know The Pain Of A Single Dog.(20 Y/O)
Need a lot of room for improvement. But it's still a good novel. It's my own bias opinion, you should read before jumping on conclusion that the novel is not good just by looking at some random review.?
Feels like any regular bad game novel with all the cliches except the mc is a bit more likable. Filler fijdkekekdkdkdkkdkddkdkdkkdkdkdkdkkdkd
Mc is said to be a delinquent but what I found out about him is that , he is just another pushover and the interaction between characters is too subtle.Chapters are filled with slashes here and there. My head starts to hurt while reading this .
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Very good!I’ve read the Russian version of the same book, and, as far as I see, the translation is even better.A nicely done historical exploration featuring the elements of romance, psychology, and even horror. Loved it!I would also like to mention that the writing style is exquisite and unique — it’s clear that the author was inspired by classic Russian literature. Can’t wait to read what will happen to John later in the book.
The author's thoughts are undoubtedly beautiful. The story seems promising and intriguing right from the beginning. The alpha's character is powerful and I am hoping it would be full of surprises too. This is a good read and recommended as well. Just some punctuations needs to be taken care of and everything else is just top notch. Cheers to the author! I am hoping to read your work further.
How were you able to create the cover for the novel, please message me back i would be very happy to know. So I can create one for my book. Thank you if you read this.