DaoistYellowBird
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A novel for a true pussy, for a true wuss. The MC can not even be considered to be a man. Damn, the plot is good but why make the MC like that? A cock-tease and a pussy. Nice writing by the way but wrong character development. Making an R-18 novel and perverted MC with no dick.
I Have to give it 5 stars alone for writing quality. I hope one day my writing skills will be just as good. I read the first four chapters and it's an interesting idea with a fascinating plot. Love the way you started the story. Let's see where the story go :)
If you have a system you are not an extra .. . .. .. .. .. .. .. ... .. .. ... .. .. .. . .. .. .mmvvm.m.k... .. .. .. ..
I love how funny this novel can get at this, and the motherly affection is heartwarming ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️.
I really hope the author continues this webnovel. Although its similar to some other, its also unique in its own way.hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
I've been waiting for this kind of story! Hurry up and vote, and if you know the raw, please post a link!?????????????????
A truly Amazing book, most of the grammar is correct, the story is really in, interesting, I like the concept of where he is overpowered but doesn’t accept it and starts like a normal human, albeit a extremely strong one, I really like the novel. it’s brilliant.
I really like your novel, i am not a native but i think your english is good. Nice story,detailed background, your mc is what it should be,not ***** and always thinking till the detail. A bit of slow but interesting. Overall the story is good. I appreciate your work. Keep it up . Thanks for the chap and nice job
Absolutely mesmerizing story line. Cant stop reading. All other duties was put on hold until I finished the story. Will definitely be looking for more books by this author.
So far (chapter 19), it’s a good novel. Keep up the good work ?So far (chapter 19), it’s a good novel. Keep up the good work ?
I will only read it BECAUSE i see op. Bye
