Sir I am fan of you work I support you own art but why mc like that even somekid got bully they fight back.Can you make more mature the mc like he almost killed by other only plot protect him.(sorry to my English).
OMG the cover is so cute! From Miao miaomiao to Miao Xiaomao, I think I'm seeing a good pattern here <3 Munya!....140140140140140140140140
mc is literally the reincarnated and modernized version of the mc from that videogame overlord trilogy from the early 2000's
the author lacks a brain cells for example at chapter 2 when the MC is fighting the ghost apparently they are servants outside and yet none of them hear the fights the scream and everything and they only show themselves after the fight, the author only wants to show fhat the mc is rich and he has a useless servant. even when the hoe is using him his still happy
I love this story! It is like a typical Xianxia, but with a few twists to make it more enjoyable for a western audience. It has far less filler, with chapter 82 correlating to around chapter 400 in a typical Xianxia, and the world seems relatively well thought out, it is clear that there are more details about the world that aren't being told to avoid an overly large info dump, but it doesn't feel like the Author ever pulls things out of his ass. There are a few downsides typical to web novels, the grammar is pretty good but not professional quality by any means, and the characters aren't really well fleshed out (still better than a typical web novel).Ultimately I would recommend this story to anyone who likes Xianxia stories, as it feels like a well-executed no-fluff Xianxia with a western twist.
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The overall story is not bad; however, the author is working on too many projects and only release 1 chapter a month is just sad... Kills the mood for the story, and I no longer interested in it.
I'm really liking the story so far, the only thing i hope you do is to not overdo it with all of the extra women. Maybe keep it at like 20 and just improve on their development, that would definitely make the story much better. Having to many women would make it hard to keep up and remember them all and it makes their love way to shallow
I don’t really like wish fulfilling novels, but I like this one. So give it a try. DJHDJDJDKDJDKRKRKKEKKDKSKSKKSKEJEEJEJEJEJEJEJEJJEEEJWSSWW
I am waiting for the author to complete it.
Overall 5 ?... This novel full of mock about "proper" Chinese novel and all "normally" FL do in the another story.. Sometimes I got that feeling if Author have really really have a big grudge with CN ????
Can't wait to read the next chapters please give more. Love the characters of this novel. Is there any link to read the whole novel at once.