Well its the first time in my life being 1st in comment section so for my first greeting , first I would like to thank the author for this novel . then dot dot dot dot ............................ Is 140 done? .. Not yet? .......
Despite how I thought that it would just be a gaming story, I was quite pleasantly surprised at the character’s interactions.I wasn’t truly focusing on grammar, but nothing major stood out to me. Or maybe I was too engrossed in reading. Which are both good things to have !Definitely would recommend, and I hope that you continue to post more chapters ! Eagerly awaiting (●´ω｀●)
After finishing volume one I have to say I am loving this book, Dreth with his no nonsense sillyness and his fellow zombies with a few screws loose, and maybe some ribs too, has been a laugh to read. I've always been a discworld fan and this is giving me the feel of a more "mature" type of humour used there, my only disappointment is I don't have enough coins to unlock every chapter right now ?.
no arrogant MC , no killing of entire clans,the beginning isn't quite great, but if you go past 10- 20 ch you wont regret it, a slice of life/comedy/action what more do you want?(its gold).
Waiting................ I will wait even when I'm ascended..............
Just to support this work.........................................................................................................
IF for some reason, this doesn't get chosen, i am leaving this site forever.... this is what is needed now that LOHP is coming to an end....
Very good novel. A well balance Character settings and full of surprises how the development of the MC. Looking forward to kingdom building with his powerful female Assassins /Subordinates. Hurray for Chad(Angels)!!!
Still going strong really love how this is progressing. Keep up the good work and don't worry about the failed April fool's joke always next year haha
Let us put aside Mad Snail variable from this review. From early chaps I see major drawback from early chapters. In this genre Author need to plant the seed of curiousity a.k.a potential plot development in early chapters because avid reader already read many kind of this novel. But except grinding we don't see much in 40 chaps. I think author just going slow and steady for development.Other than that, we already got some potential major conflicts, Iron willed MC that have grip on his temper, and our favorite and probably one of most produced genre. Wdyt fellow daoist?
A strange protagonist, "He can't do what ordinary people do, but ordinary people can't do what he can do.," sums it up pretty well. World building isn't there, because this isn't a world. It's a simulation in the form of a game populated by broken souls. Once the MC jumps out of the game the setting gains a bit of depth, but, with the end just around the corner, nothing is fleshed out. 99% of the story follows the protagonist's perspective, so we learn what he learns as he learns it. The ending wasn't bad, a little open-ended, with a bit of a legacy left for those fated.
Very nice thank you writer lady for your story. Amazing story amazing characters I very like characters they are amazing really good very happy. Please Indian character diversity love very much.