Kamala_Nadhia
Wu dong grinned. Nie sounded just like a pissed off girlfriend or worse a nagging wife but the thought of that only made him grin wider. His date. He had postponed everything he had planned to do just to have one dinner night with his daughter. He had been seeing her fewer and fewer ever since saw her DingDong telecom took up a huge nationwide project and have been heading for stardom. He had been busy with daily conferences, Business meetings and trips, interviews with business blogs and articles and...the list was endless. He didn't want to think about work not now that he was with his little bundle of warm sunshine. Nothing else in the world mattered more to him right now except her. Fatherly instinct rose in his chest and He suddenly reached for her and hugged her small frame and planted another kiss on her head.
"I didn't want to do it originally, but you leave me no choice. Also you little squirt remember that when I, the great Wang Shi, says something you can be sure that I will follow through," Wang Shi said with a hint of pride and a smile. Suddenly, his face turned for the worst as he said, "Damn! I slipped up! Listen Wei-er you must never say my name out loud! This is extremely important and you must promise me!" Wang Shi placed his hands on Wang Wei's shoulders and stared deep into his eyes.
"Truthfully, yes, I did, but none of that matters, currently you're trespassing to our Mansion, and I'll stop you no matter what." she reaffirm her fighting pose. "Tai-chi Martial Artist, Hong Meiling, prepare yourself!"
It's just the prologue and it already has me entrapped to the story and I don't want to escape. What can I say? Your works are always the best. It always leaves me wanting for more. ? There is no complaints or whatsoever. The way you write is and will always be beautiful. ?Sincerely, an avid reader from your wattpad stories...Mortem.
"So, I've been thinking for a while now about this proposal and it is all about our marriage. It's not a new thing between the two of us.
I catch that same line again. 'You threw me away'. It's true I could have seriously hurt her if there had been something sharp in the direction I pushed her, if the dragon had aimed a fireball, if...okay, I guess there are a lot of If's. But her line 'you threw me away' gets me thinking that she's not referring to that fact. There's something personal going on here...or am I just overthinking it?
At the center of the village, the Allosaur clan stood. Its members growled and grunted like savage beasts on a leash. Their eyes craved for battle and blood, as their fingers twitched eagerly for something to tear apart. Not a single one of them had been spared from Keshrak's newfound magic. Even the younglings and elders had transformed into ferocious creatures.
((( SUB-QUEST )))
For the moment, I'll leave it with this open-ended ending to leave open the possibility of me coming back to it to the future (or even do an entire re-write) while I work on other projects, both on Webnovel and others.
The sun above shone ever so brightly, but no one would ever have known that in a few hours, no one will ever see the light caused by this ceslestial body ever again.
to be continued
Saw that this story needed one more review to get it's official rating so I read it. The whole thing and I'm giving my honest review currently. I love the story and everything. But there are some problems with the characters in my opinion. They just seem too flat but hey, isn't most of them are. But Other than that this was a good read.
