We. Need. More! Finally some good kingdom building
Story has a great start but from academy ark it became really boring, mc just a side character, he has less screen time from either one of his friends and enemies, i'm currently at chapter 206 and i can't read it further.From what i see he would be a side character, or one of many mc in his own slice of life story. Why i think so? because he wants to travel with his friends in the future.So if you like story with several mc's, you would like this story, if not it would be boring and a waste of time.It has a great start though, i really liked it.
Read what was free: grammar needs a lot of work. Saying wrong tenses of words, changing perspectives without notice, and other minor errors like wrong words at times. The plot has a lot of holes for me. Can’t gain cultivation from lower cultivation monsters but yet one did at least. Soul coins currency is hard to appraise since something’s cost a lot while artifacts are super cheap. One major plot hole for me is what happens to equipment of those who died inside the dungeon? Also who would ever a place 2 whole armies were practically wiped out??? Are the people in this world dumber then the mc? The world building is almost zero. No since of directions where each kingdom is or how big they are. Wish you luck but seems like enough people read this for you
Absolutely worth reading! Fun mix of plot concepts... contemplative but not deep. Then action! The one thing that missing sometimes is scene background and description. Hard to follow or visualize the scene. But who cares when we get such fun characters! Sia will slowly win you over, though she's an airhead at times. And I can't wait to see Ika in action again. Give this one a try.
Wdym 5 chapters Trial Read??Also why is there so much edited MTL in the current novels?? (Class: Full-Time Mage (better than Part-Time i guess?), 'Emperor of Europe (?????).Generic Mc no. 25737183
@chapter 43. So far so good. If you can oerlook some grammatical errors, then this one is for you. My only concern is there is still no Lemon scene lol. He already met a succubus and a hot witch and still no H Scene cmon Dude You said there will be and H scene
At this point I can't even tell if this is actually an original novel or a half-decent translation of a trashy mech/gene cultivation CN webnovel...MC still the same... And loves arguing with opponents in battle... is also complete trash who can't deal with returning enemy he already defeated... Thinks with his jiji too much Retarded weak MC thinks more about getting p**ssy than getting op and dominating the world with his system ...................................
A very interesting concept and overall fun/unique idea but the story feels a bit rushed to the point that what should have been a 30 chapter arc is finished in 2 chapters leaving the reader having trouble feeling attached to any passing characters or place the mc is surrounded by at the time. Unfortunately the writing is very inconsistent and erratic for the most part as well on top of a lot of grammatic errors. I feel as a first draft this has promise but needs to be restarted and thoroughly planned out along with a good editor. But as of it's current condition I can't keep reading the story. Best of luck to the author and editor.
I could only get in a couple a chapters before i had to stop. Alot of inconsistencies and the name of his helper just kinda killed it for me. Maybe it gets better but i had to stop before that.
Esse livro é muito interessanteJá fazia um tempo que eu buscava um livro que o protagonista fosse um deus tentando retomar seu trono .................. ......... .......................... ........
A story to be this short and having all the qualities of a novel. The characters development was good and the story unravels smoothly with I'm media res as a method. Overall a wonderful love story?????
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