Very good novel, keep it up please……………
Painful to read honestly like the slave masters being able to sell the Dothraki
MAAAN BRO THIS LOOKS INSAAAAANE. I gotta read it! Im just going to give a selfless review even though I havent read it yet I already know its going to be good!.
Does that cover not enough to tell you how cool this story will be?well, the synopsis certainly does!This novel has a lot of potential, and I'm waiting for more! Goodluck author!
Very interesting novel. Good beginning story, solid character building, and nice interactions between characters. Can't wait to see how the story progresses. Keep up the good work, author!
Worldbuilding: World-building is one of the best web novels so far based on my reading experience. It had vivid imagery, a well-detailed description of each place, and an enlivened atmosphere, especially on the coliseum scene. Even this novel has a lot of variety with races such as human, elf, and many more.Character: I do like that all the characters in this novel are very diverse, not only the race, but they appear too. Each of them is very distinct from one another. I am also very gladful that the author gives some pictures about the character's appearance which is very impressive. Even the personality of the characters is also distinct too. However, there is one nitpicky opinion from mine and I am very sorry to say this. Sometimes the author put's an infodump to describe the character's personality or the introduction such as the background. Instead, I want the character introduction more into showing such as either on dialogue and action that the character did. So it can make the character more flesh out and fascinating.As for the main character, Ryu, I actually really like his cold personality and his less-talking demeanor. However, I believe the author will show more context about his backstory and even a significant development that I can't wait to see later chapters.Another praise I want to give is the very smooth and fluid writing. Especially on the sentence structuring, the imaginative word usages, and even the good grammar.Overall, that's all I have to say about this novel and this is one that has very good potential on the top ranking in Webnovel. Thank you and keep up the good work!!!
The writing quality is superb, and the story development was really on point. The characters are very interesting. Although the world and premise were quite full of cliches, it's still a good work. Very recommended to new readers out there.
Jack, an introvert who was bullied and taken advantage of because of his name which means doggie.His father was not good at handling money and made bad decisions regarding this and incurred a huge debt in which he now has to pay since his parents died.Now he has to survive with a worsening predicamentWill it bring Jack to insanity or salvation?I am loving the story thus far and everything's all good except for some grammatical errors but it could be cleared with an editor.This novel can reach great heightsAuthor please upload more and regularlyI am willing to spend my SP here daily if you fulfill these wishes;3
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The synopsis and title are both interesting. The cover is nice too and it can catch the reader's attention. I read the first chapter of this book and I noticed that the author used a good set of words
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