Huh what is it tadashi are you okay he just looked at her
Tora was now covered in sweat.
The distraught family looked for their child for years and yet the Miss couldn't be found anywhere, so they slowly started to give up. But a week ago in The City of Dreams, news came that their daughter had been found, he couldn't believe it at first, no he refused to believe it because he'd accepted that his daughter was dead but something kept nagging at him, a day before the news arrived it was his late wives death anniversary, an in a desperate moment he'd asked for a witch
Nikolai cursed under his breath. "Which ones? No that doesn't matter. They're not just seceding though right? That wouldn't be enough for the Princess."
"She killed him!"
"You really are ..."
By changing her momentum through shearing the slime, she seemed to liquidly change direction in the air, almost using the comfortable hilt of her blade as a trapeze. In a flash, she had already gutted the second greyish-white slime. Sensing danger, she dropped low to the ground to avoid a barrage of highly corrosive bronze waves. The golden slimes had begun attacking in full, emanating crescent-shaped bronze waves from the tips of their heads. These waves crashed harshly against the stone of the stairs, eroding it away with crackling sounds while releasing a thick caustic smoke.
I'd hoped you'd use speech marks for ease identification of direct speech
spelling, and grammar is badI hope the bovel doesn't get any more sexually darker than it is. Love the main character and main Heroine
author have you decided on yuri thing personally I hope there is not and also does this have ntr I hope there is not
nice world building and power system. a good evil MC with no harem , romance or any similar poison. keep up the good work author
This is great!Writing Quality: No typo's as far as I have read, the prose is good I've not been confused once so far. There are some info dumps but those are essential for world building.Story Develpment: The author clearly has a plan for the plot, so far the story is cohesive.Character Design: The cast so far is pretty small, we get time to spend with characters before new ones are introduced which is something I adore.Updating Stability: As of the chapter I'm reading 4 chapters per week, which is phenominal with the writing quality.World Background: Future Earth space age, I've not read far enough for anything else.