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-Translations are at most subpar.
-The plot is borderline boring and repetitive that the stability of updates doesn't justify it.
-No story development at all with all the repetitive cliches.
-Character Design? The main character should have been a strong one based on his "dragon" bloodline and genius comprehensive abilities, but the author decided to make him a sidekick.
-World Background? What's that? 150 chapters of how some background mob characters talk between each other without MC making a single appearance.
Overall the whole novel is poorly thought of.
I'm already winston.
The two main characters continue to unfold before our eyes revealing difficult histories riddled with pain. The world is a grim dystopian future where acts of kindness are rare and only the strongest prosper. This is a quest for both identity and purpose as our antagonist struggle to obtain freedom. Will they know what to do with this elusive commodity should they find it?
I love this novel as well as its comic not bad too but I couldnt find any complate version of the novel so I hope in here it would be complated since I cant wait to learn how its all going to end up
Omg I love this series. Lucian and hazel couldn’t be any cuter. The first book had me on an emotional roller coasters. Just started the second book and I cannot wait to see what happens.
I totally love this book. It's well worth the money spent on it. 5⭐'s in my eyes for all categories. As the character develo** so do the plot twists. The chapter cliffhangers are intense and leave you wishing for the next release
Our MC is a narcissist, who has a fetish for affairs with women. He is a prison warden, and then karma hits. Lo and behold he transmigrated into a gigglo's body about to be executed. It has a decent plot line, but the MC has split personality disorder now. It distracts the reader and at times makes one sigh.
Nice concept, I like the way you use the pirate concept for your novel. Though I think will be more to understand. Character design is also very considerate.
Just reading the title I have a few associtions in my mind ;) Firts "24 Hours to Live" - science fiction action thriller with Ethan Hawke, Xu Qing... Second "24" - action drama created by Joel Surnow and Robert Cochran with oustanding Kiefer Sutherland... After a few chapters I know from were are you from :) I mean in the sense that I know what kind of books/movies you like, and I can see clearly some influences... I like your idea for the storyline. There are a few stylistic errors, but doesn't really matter... Well done!
Good novel that is very interesting as the mce travels through out the vast world as he begins from the bottom and rises to the top. I recommend it highly
If u like this genre u must read this. Interesting novel and the author is quite good. He happily accepts the feedbacks and gives quick response. For him every reader and their reviews are important.?
