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Very refreshing to read after countless cultivation/magic/system novels. I'm just reading webnovels for fun and I can say that this one is fun to read.
I am interested to see how the story will go. It's going fine so far, at least for me
I had a wonderful time reading this. It's beautiful, complex and genuinely heartwarming. I felt pity for the MC which shows that the character writing was evidently impressive. The concept is captivating and the way the author has written the plot is truly commendable, as I didn't feel confused at any point. Above all, the description of a future era gives the novel the precise tint of sci fi that makes the book enjoyable. I could go on and on, but I don't wanna seem exaggerated so, I just wanna say that this is actually "really good". Overall, wonderful work, Author!
Summed up in two words (cuz one isn't enough): TRULY SOUL-STIRRING
Another novel from one of my favourite authors~!!If you're afraid of spoilers just go read the book before continuing, not my problem.I've read IHS and I'm loving it, and sensei said PADS gonna be in same timeline and universe, so I'm hoping for some great mystery revelations, and even moar mind boggling mysteries (I'm not dat smart so I'll just try to keep my theories to myself).I've read first chapter and loved it, it has mixed elements of past and future.If you haven't read it yet, Go read rn!!
Author keep up the good work ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
honestly the story is good and the writer is quiet talented too , but there were a some plot holes such as when the mc left to adventure he was undercover and only the guild master recognised him , and then left to slay the dragon , meanwhile Lancelot found his aura at the crime scene ( idk man black tech , helps you know the owner of the aura , how it works ? not explained ) and somehow and with no further lead he kind of went where the mc is ,how he knew his location ? not explained , saw him fighting the dragon , used a spell (he's a swordman who can use mana and divinity ,which is unbalanced) that teleports the enemy against his will from miles away , how it works ? not explained then he made a barrier that made him invincible , how it works ? not explained if you read the above you'll get my first point : only a little is explained.my second point is how inconsistent the story is , for example lancelot crossed the distance between 2 nations in a day and a half max , while in the 'castle attack' arc the duchess didn't call the Duke to come because it'll take a week ? ,i mean the distance was 20 kilometers and he was far more powerful than Lancelot so shouldn't he cross it in an 2 hours max ?
the story and character development is so gooooood and awesome
i really didn't expect much at first but i have to admit this was really a hidden gem the first 20 chapters are so good that even if the story turned trush afterward the story would still be good the author really has talent for taking a cliché and adding a twist the changes the whole thing.
My honest opinion and what I noticed, the story has minimal errors in terms of writing, it doesn't get in the way of reading, the release of a week can bother some, but due to the quality of the story, it's not possible to remove the merit just because of the capitols delay (I prefer quality over quantity). The narrative isn't bad, it's good. And about the story, volume 1 was pretty standard, nothing special that I remember, but volume 2, I thought it was very good, it was wonderful. But as everything that goes up will also have to come down, we arrived at volume 3 which is horrible and dark, not because of the writing but the course that the story took, and instead of the author changing the course he continued, if you don't believe me can you read the comments on the chapters of the third volume, do you want the reasons? The protagonist's behavior becomes irrational and a new character is as useful as Sakura.People can come and say that volume 3 is to develop the character, yes, but you don't develop a character by irritating your reader, quite the opposite, you have to develop it by making your reader feel empathy for the protagonist and not anger. But it's no use saying that the protagonist had his reasons, the reasons are not clear for several capitolos making their attitudes irrational, doing things that normal people wouldn't do.
The fact that the author is allowed to have a personal life should be considered a crime against humanity. As much as I enjoy this novel, the slow update rate is soon to be my bane of existence. Requesting ally support to capture author and form him to write in a basement, no food if no new updates.
The only good things about this novel are the translation and the system. Other than are nothing but just a trash. Protagonist is ABSOLUTELY useless and idiot without the System, only know how show-off, almost never use his brain.