This story is worst than trash..Trash story trash character stupid creator!! I think this story deserve nothing more than trashThe creator are very stupid!!!
4.8/5Great work by author. The story is incredibly realistic and explores a genre I have not seen before. It's quite intriguing.He could use some work on writing grammar, but excellent overall :)
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It has been interesting to read this novel, the development of the characters in my opinion are well done, like the background story, you can see that you thought about your novel in the future, I hope to continue reading this fantastic work of yours. **: I'm not very good with English and all this I wrote using the translator. ??Other PS: This is the first time I comment on a work so sorry if I did not give a very professional opinio.???
Its a really good novel, the grammar and sentance structure have minor errors but nothing huge or immersion breaking. I only have two complaints. One is the lack of a system interface as of chapter 45, a example of how this interface could look like is below.Name: XXXXLevel: XXPercentage to next level: XX%Technique: Ulimate XX Sword Skill Rank: Novice (+)And so on.The other compliant is how later on there is more inspiration taken from Way of the Devil than I would have liked but the early stuff is very original such as the different types of phyiques and sects.Overall this book deservea a solid 4.4-4.6 stars and the author should be very proud of all the hard work and they have put in to give readers like me such a good novel. Recommended, especially if you have never read Way of the Devil.
writing quality isn't the worst but far bellow the standards of what the rating of the book would suggest, basically reviews seem lil fake ? honestly just barely better than some mtl novels that webnovel puts out.story development is very weird at times, there is no pace to it, stuff just happens without a good reason, basically a lot of forced plots just because you as the author can do it i guess. I guess it's due to being an inexperienced author and it's hard to make that plot development seem more natural you, idk... probably know about this problem yourself.characters are honestly bad... like they aren't even budget author pov's copies, copies so bad that it's insulting to the originals. Ye I said it, might seem harsh but that's the reality of things, you have 30+ reviews telling you how good the book is, but it's not.... not even close. the idea it self is good but execution is way offI could go in deeper but I won't lol, maybe will check this book out again in the far future and write another review ?
Despite the seemingly inconspicious synopsis, the story is written quite well, with some hints of mystery mixed in and a natural development.
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Like I've said before it's not my work (which technically means it's stolen). Just something I found online and decided to repost for people like me who prefers using offline reading apps
love this story . slightly slow burn, but good pairing.
This is a really interesting story and I hope I can have the chance to read more than these 40 chapters in the near future. The system is unique!!! It's interesting how he didn't lose his humanity even though he isn't a human anymore. I disagree with all these people that say it was stupid to help the fleeing mother and daughter. It's understandable how he still cares about humans and he tries to help their living conditions every chance he gets. Just because he became a vampire some people think he has to turn, in no time, to some kind of monster that cares about nothing and bring calamities right and left just for his satisfaction...... these people should check their morality and most of all their mentality. Fucking psycos!!!!
In a fan fiction fusion world, anything is possible. A simple concept delivered at a modest pace, this gives so much to the reader as they try to figure out the next great leap.