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Pretty interesting story. It's a sci-fi type story full of war of despair. I will keep this story in my library.Still the author is still new but he is slowly improving.There some issues but overall a good story
That was a really good novel with great story. It's a shame that the author decide to drop this. Sorry for my bad english it is not my first language
I read the first chapter and was strongly reminded of a Korean drama by the name of "Fall in love with me" and the first chapter is what happened in the first episode is this a fan fiction?! I'll read further but the chapter titles are telling me its following the kdrama story if they were in a fantasy world not a bad thing but not really your story as it were you even took from the title of drama as well "fall for me.
After getting somewhat popular author pulls all the chapters and doenst even leave a teaser of the novel. All for some stupid Amazon Money from selling the book? Seems like a bad decision to me. Could've just made a patreon
Keep it up dude. Im really enjoying the book so far ??
i iike this novel. i like protagonist. story enjoyable but patroitis. i very like game about mekanisme, class, npc etc. i was reading this novel in other website but stopped.. i hope editor pick this novel.
I am your biggest fan.Never forget that. I made you to who you are today.Top 1 fan contribution - Entrail_JIThat aside, story really good.
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stay away from this novel, for your own good.
Over all, it’ not a bad book, it seriously fails at the translation quality, but the story is fun as you’d expect from cultivation novels
Not sure, how many Chapters, it says I've read, but I read it before it was on Qidan. It was one of my first before I knew of mainstream novels such as Desolate Era, Coiling Dragon, Stellar Transformations and etc. (Note, their author)During the time I read it, it was one of my favorites.(The bar was pretty low back then, as I didn't know the above novels)Story Development, Character Design and World Building are slightly reminiscent of Martial God Asura in repetitiveness.But, as long as they don't keep continuing, like Martial God Asura, and stop somewhere such as #### Stage, instead of finding a higher Realm and continuing the same thing as the beginning. They should be fine
Ever since the system got upgraded it became basically repeated breakthrough the story barely progress its not even telling what the other heroine doing in stimulation anymore like before
