Hello my loyal readersThis is chapter 200 celebration reviewIt has been a hell of a journey throughout these short period .. nearly month and half since i started this story. I have now written 204 chapters to the moment and nearly 320k wordsI hope u liked my novel so farNow, i want to celebrate with you. So i need your suggestions about how to do that.Would you like me to write a side story? Pnro? Or another one related to the hidden mysteries to the novel?Do you want a mass release? 10 chapters in oneday perhaps?Just tell me what do you think and i will try to make your wishes come trueI will wait for one more week then i will tell you about the final rewards i chose from your suggestionsKeep supporting me and ibro, the journey has just begunHappy journey in my novel worldThx for your support so far, it means a alot to me.
3stars for the update stability sry authorbut overall great story unique in its own way ..............................................
A good novel.However, there's various points needed to be mentioned.1- Early wall pay chapters, with only 31 chapters being able to decide whether you like the story or not. This isn't a problem itself If it weren't for the short chapters. The chapter are too short for what the novels need.2- This point is related with the previous one, due to short chaps, there isn't a feeling of development with every chapter, you need to start lengthen the chaps or at least rethink about how you will build each chapter, please don't fall under the premise of spamming chapters for small events that could be easily be fixed with a length of 1.800k to 2k words length.3- The early chaps really need to be extended to at least 3k words to explain your new readers where they are and let everything set go for the walled chaps, where you could put the story on.Nonetheless, the novel have an interesting premise, a good world building and background and the MC is interesting. What I liked more about this novel is the ground to improvement with the MC personality, as having a new chance to experiment things he couldn't in his previous life could lead to interesting plots.The females characters are well portrayed as the side characters personalities too.
I like the story, the only things I do not like are the facts that he is not the only reincarnation anymore and the stupid love triangle.I seriously feel several chapters worth were wasted by introducing a love triangle as to me, they don't add anything to the story and it was too late in its introduction to make it help in drawing in a female crowd.The romance aspect of the story is poorly constructed which just further lowers its value. I suppose it is done in an effort to do character building but it seems to have the opposite effect. The drama makes the MC seem more and more bland.I do like how humanity isn't alone in the universe, and the way the story is set up to evolve from there, with infighting between factions and aliens.
I would u give less than one star but there's noting like on the reviews anyway20 chapters with no tittle and there's no world background sigh what more disappointing was that he never had a cantact with other people and Suddenly he got a girl come on men there something called logic u dam ass shxxt have same sense every one can write the samething over and over. All u do is write about screen status and kill some beast.
Good story, I am wondering how this review system works for the books since you need a minimal of 120 words. I dont have much to say about the book since I am flipping pages and still continuing to read. I did enjoy it.
An amazing work. Loved the way the story progresses. The emotions are well written. Raw in nature. Keep up the good work author. Loved it really.
Sigh* - I wish I could say something good... but I just cant , it's basically imposible for me to keep up with everything , like who is the MC , I already forgot , If posible , make it a bit better to follow when we are back to MC and when we are at someone else please (if posible) not sure if im the only one who strugles to keep up with where we are
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MC seemed to gain a strong spirit, but it seems they're going to make him a healer instead of becoming an op fighter, maybe it will change... i was hoping for an fighter so not my cup a tea
Ok can anyone answer me if the MC ever read any cultivational novel , anime etc to have knowladge of some clech moments....?????????????????????????
Wish this gets picked. .