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Website : qidian chinaViews : 10.11millionRating : 9.2(1188)Chapters : 1250(approx) Status : completed Word count : 3.38million author level : great No of works : 7Disscussion : 963Year started : 2012Chinese title : 神煌
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As I understand you're a beginner writer, I'll add 2 more stars to each review score, while the review part will show my actual evaluation.Writing Quality 1: Definitely the novel’s biggest weak point. I hoped it would get better later as the writer gained more experience, but close to a hundred chapters in, and it remains practically the same. The only improvement I noticed was that you no longer alternated between Qin Feng and Feng Qin.I would suggest using Grammarly and also breaking your sentences into smaller ones. Beyond that, all I can think of is for you to get an editor and/or improve your English.Stability of Updates 5: Personally, I don't like this category, as sometimes the writer needs more time to finish up a chapter, but may end up sacrificing the quality to keep the release rate, so I always give it a 5.Story Development 2: The story moves, though there are problems with fillers. Beyond that, there’s also the MC doing things that really don’t make sense.MC meets Wukong, trains once and that’s it. I don’t think he’s ever shown training again, he simply becomes OP.Group of gangster smashed his apartment, where his mother and sister live, and said they would come back the next morning. MC, who’s now capable of beating all of them by himself, simply lets them break into his home again, where his family is, before beating them.His friend —and the one helping him in his revenge— is held hostage and MC does nothing against the kidnapper.Also, the story is set on Earth, where the existence of cultivators (friars as they are called here) is unknown to the public.That’s good and all, but then MC —who had never heard of Friars before— meets Wukong and in the next few hours he: meets some woman with an extremely rare cultivation body and witnesses a battle between two friars.Then a few days later he stumbles into a trio of friars while he was getting revenge, and also witness another battle, this one so big that destroyed a building in the middle of the city.It just seems impossible that their existences were really kept hidden for so long and still are.Character Design 1: Characters barely have any depth to them, being mostly copies of one another.Male characters are arrogant douchebags, who only know to abuse their power/wealth. Also they, and only they, feel the need for sex.Female characters exist either to engage in sex with the arrogant douchebags or to almost being raped by them so that MC can come to their rescue.Maybe one or other character isn’t such a copy, but they still lack any depth to them.World Background 2: Again, the story is set on Earth with a secret cultivator society. We are shown a few glimpses into this cultivator world, but that’s it.Review score (1+5+2+1+2)/5 = 2.2 Score given = (3+5+4+3+4)/5 = 3.8
One of the worst novels Ive read. The positiv is the world description. Otherwise, complete and uther garbage. There really is no logic in the MC persona, after 6 chapters the ^world^ isntbreally described. The system isnt really a system with interaction, the MC just knows through the system. . The plot (if there really is one) is so full of holes you can drive a truck through it.
man this was a disappointment. I had high hopes this would be good, but man was a wrong. MC is fucking weird and not in a good way. the author forgets what he said 1 chapter before. One chapter he said The MC had good grades and the next, his grades sucked. Its so dam slow and boring, and every chapter feels like filler. Your just waiting around for something fun to happen, but it never does.
This seemed interesting in the begining. MC was interesting and I liked the concept. Sadly the translation quality takes a nose drive after chapter 30ish. Now it's not worth spending the coins on it. You can read for the same quality on mtl. So far around 60 chapters in it's still a fresh concept but starting to feel like a generic faceslapping novel. Just hard to read with the translation and formating.
I love the idea, the system and the structure. This story is one of my favourites on webnovel.My 2 wants are:A regular upload time.A story that progresses with good arcs, and appropriate scaling.
Where the hell is a new chapter? its been 1 month!!! This is a premium book but there has been no update for a whole month, no note of why the translator is gone either!!
do continue writing this story.its fantastic
I can warn people in advance. You may find it boring at first, but very soon you will see a lot of action.I like the Japanese theme. A long time ago I read the Vagabond manga. After that, I read the book by Eiji Yoshikawa. Therefore, I have great expectations from this book. I like everything at the moment. I hope that the author will continue to make a good novel.