Suddenly becomes super racist from Chapter 114. How is it possible, you ask? I was as just as surprised that the author was able to include racism into a cultivation novel.Essentially, the author made white people the demons in the book and goes off on racist rants.Complete disappointment.
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The beginning is kinda boring, it feels like to much explaining went into how the game works and the details of it. The chase scene was wonderful, though it felt like you wrote that first then realized you needed another opening, and the over explanation of the controls came. Other than that its creative, it definitely does have potential
bruh, when will this MF get pick up? I've been waiting since 1669. SMH
I must admit that these an original story well conceived but I'm sorry to say that you make a story based on a single goal saving her mother from a so-called disease of which nothing is known and whether humanity can actually cure her or not these due to the lack of relevant information at first instead of focusing on the essentials. What saddens me the most these why you want to make a one-piece style story that never ends because no matter the one-piece type story all The endings will look sloppy because of all the plotholes its would have been better to make his mother a goal for 1 arc and then change for another but not the the objective is to find an object that is supposed to fulfill the wishes, these the dumbest thing to do especially in order to save someone sick after all you want to tell me that he will find it after only some month of research while the others one searches for a long time how his mother will live until then.To finish this story could have been serious if the objective had not been so childish I know that you supposedly want to show us the determination of the MC to save his mother but the "quest for the one piece" turn it into a stupid joke from my point of view
writing feel like mtl but they did do some touch up but i hate gender mix so 2*the rest are very good for 20 chapters.no dumb and stupid garbage yet.
Shame on everyone giving this pile of waste more than one star. A new chapter has not been release for five months now.Characters are meh, story is dumb. Descriptions of fights is bland. Everyone gallops everywhere.Not surprising they stopped.
Amazing Novel. I love the way the author tells the story. It’s very Unique and Different from other eastern fantasy. I can’t wait for the author to upload more chapters. ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️??????
At first 100 chapters it's good the plot is nice but when it comes to 100+ the novel become slow it's is already 100 chapters yet he still doesn't solve the protagonist (Xiao) and in the 100+ chapters everything is only about the travel of Lin fan having dinner with his parents visiting her girlfriend nothing else it's getting boring and one more thing it's not like a villain at all more like Xiao is the villain here
This novel is truly very good and funny. I nearly died from laughing.The main character transmigrates from Earth to the immortal cultivation world, examined for not being qualified to cultivate. One day he is accepted by a run down sect which is desperate in need of a disciple to fulfill the quota to be qualified for being a third-rate sect.The Sect Master as well as the disciples are afraid of not fulfilling the quota so, they exaggerate every small thing, portraying themselves as supreme immortals and a supreme hidden sect.They teach him by adding nonsense but he always finds a way to learn and astonish them.I strongly support the writer to continue this novel. And hope that it will be on air after next week.???
Already 500+ chapters in. I do think the novel is interesting and for those who rated the novel thrash when they themselves haven't read past 50 simply don't know what they're talking about. Period.The plot itself is really similar to swallowed star and took a bit of time to really flesh out all the interesting parts. Tho sometimes I had to read a paragraph repeatedly cause the author likes to info dump mid sentence and left it for the reader to connect the dots if they wanna make sense of it. Then again, it's still bearable for me. As for why i considering dropping the novel after investing in so many chapters is because the author had the audacity the repeat the same plot, where mc is thrown into a nearly identical prison dimension, with a beauty surnamed Bai, and the only solution was to cultivate a dual cultivation technique which was taught by MC's pet that cling on him 24/7 because the Mc was too dumb to figure it out, with the same punchline where the beauty calls him a pervert and what not. Now imagine having to read that nearly exact same set of circumstances twice. Imagine how fking unoriginal, cringe and lazy the author must be to come up with such a brilliant idea. At this point the author prolly just milking word counts for some money.