JBFIRE77
i just read this book through 6 chapters in an hour in one sitting and i can assure everyone that this is a great book and i need more chapters soon the flowery of language is beautiful and its so well written and there is action and thriller packed to keep u up at night and look i am not exagerating this is a great book good job author need more chapters now pls !
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i dont like apocalyptic setting so i dont like this novel i only read few chapters and stopped but i still give 5 coz the author writing style is very good he is one of best writers in webnovelif the writer is reading my review then i hope you can write a novel likeuniversal storage box novel,nowadays so many writers write novels about transmigration or reincarnation iseksi to cultivation world or in modren urban cultivation i have no problem with that but its been used too much, this universal storage box novel is unique its about a guy living in the present modern world who got a magical box if you store things in the box then at a radom time it will randomly exchange an item you stored in the box with an item from another world another universe, and if the owner was lucky and got a 3 items from the same world same universe then he can teleport there and come back to earth later, i hope for blizzard author to write a novel like universal storage box novel if you cant find it in web novel you can google it please read some chapters of that novel and try to make a novel like it, the most i liked about that novel is the mc will bring a waifu from every universe he visit, i also highly recommenduniversal storage box novel for everyone
The kid seems mc is a good guy but not. Excessively steals. He is smart but an idiot. His first hook up he plays the paramour. MC seems like he will be crazy op. When the author gave him a weakness (mana) he immediately gave him a work around.Gramatically the story is fine. I just think the story isnt for me.
I must say... I'm surprised.It's hard to see a novel about a person going from a less advanced world to a high advenced one. Usually is the other way around.I like it. Only a few grammar error here and there, but what really hooked me up was the interaction between the characters, it was fluid and...human, something quite difficult to find in some novels. Not many forced dialogues.I had a good time reading it, and if you like sci-fi, you might enjoy it.
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The content in the novel was highly professional, the author seems very clear about the vocabulary and vision of the novel. The mystery of the story seems very attractive to read. Loved the overall quality of the novel! keep it up!
Author-san here to give his novel a review, hn.The story is just as the name says, about a human that became a God, the protagonist didn't really believe in Gods but in the end, became one, which is an irony, there's some comedy but not much, it's a world of cultivation and the strong reigns supreme, however, the protagonist had a quite naive idea that he didn't have to get strong faster but it changed after a certain thing happened, I won't say anymore but I hope that with this review, you'll get to understand more of the story, read it and possibly like it.Writing Quality: I won't say it is bad but I won't say it is the best too, there are some small mistakes here and there but only a few of them really affect the reading experience.Stability of Updates: On the start, it was extremely bad and some days, there weren't any chapters, however, now the author (which is me), is posting every day and there are chapters stocked, five of them for now, I will att this when it increases on the comment.Story Development: It is fast-paced on the start, the reason being that I didn't want him to waste time on the Kingdom, however, on the arc of the Birthday Party, the pace slows down and is now on a good pace, enjoyable to read.Character Design: Not really sure of what to say there, sorry, lmao.World Background: The author (me) developed the World Background quite well, explaining some things about the world there and there, on the start, not much information about the Continent he lives at is known but as the story advanced, he got understood how it worked, for now, only three of the Seven Great Sects were introduced but it is rather complete.Enjoy the novel, cya :)
I really liked your description and synopsis. I think you can write quite well so keep on writing and update soon..Looking forward to it......
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The story is interesting. This type of concept is very new to me. I have read very few stories like this. But, still I am going to look forward for the coming chapters. Keep up the good work ?
good read waiting for the plot twist cant say much as the story just started but from what I gathered the antidote being the blood type is a bit far fetched. but good story plot
