The Midnight Flower Series: Ari Constantine

I'm done reading all the chapters, please update soon. Also update for your other story, I really love your writing style. My english vocabulary wasn't really wide and your choice of words makes it easy for me to understand, that's why I enjoy reading your story.

Don't let the bad reviews stop you from reading this awesome novel. First the r-18 comes in later. This is not a story that only focuses on getting lots of girls but giving those girls a good story with the mc. The adventure of the author from layers to layers is amazing. He even goes back to earth which is not something you see much from other novels with same genre.The characters are well written. Its not a novel where he gets a new girl in his harem every 100 chaps.  He loves his fam and his scenes with them are pretty wholesome. His fam also plays a role and they are not just in the background. Claire and Logan power couple is one of the best out there. The girls in the harem are not trophies and are trying their best to get stronger.The cultivation systems are unique and might get a bit confusing as you go on but author has a guide for that. The mystery in the novel is even quite intriguing. The world is pretty well built. Author takes time to introduce the territories and its people. There is also a bit of comedy here and there.MOST IMPORTANTLY, he doesnt leave his wives when he goes on an adventure. He bring them and fights with him together. Something you hardly see in other novels.Im not saying that the novel has no problems but they are pretty small and are only at the start of the novel. The author improves along the way and massive improvements can already be seen early on the novel .As you go on you can see that Davis' adventure with his wives are amazing.P.S. : Shirley is a goddessOverallWriting Quality : 4.5/5Stability of Updates : 5 (Although we would love 3 chaps a day)Story Development : 5Character Design : 5World Background 5

I love novels taking place in blue planet because time, culture, science, and art are skewed, so you can see people from the 1920s while having streaming and space ships.

Only got a few chapters in so the high ratings on updating stability and world background are just me giving author the benefit of the doubt. Concept itself, while not necessarily original, is good. But 1) the grammar and writing style (author "mysteriously" leaving out stuff in an to me really annoying way, like there is no motivation for stuff more then whether it is convenient for author or not) are horrible. And 2) characters feel really flat, no realistic emotions from mc. I would give it another try if it was editet to flow better though.

bruh, when will this MF get pick up? I've been waiting since 1669. SMH

Omg omg omg.. first one that I have felt that it warranted a review!! Please add more chapters!!! This cant be the end! It's just the beginning!! Please!!!