For your 1st book, this is awesome. The pacing kinda threw me off. but it gets better with time. and hoping, it will get even better with time. good luck for everything.
I don't know what happened to WB but I have to say that the last few batches of trial novels are really not outstanding but disappointing to say the least. In this case you have the typical cliché of a young girl betrayed by her half-sister, stepmother, father and ex-fiance...she stumbled into the first man that crossed her road who magically is a young, rich, handsome and overbearing CEO who rules the world ....She got drugged, had *** and got pregnant... what to say? There's nothing new here!!! Continue your road! Worse in this badly written one everything happened in the first 10 chapters or so....you know how this will end up so why wasting time?
3. Ridicoulus Human III (Pretty Rare)
"Oh, it's not finish yet? Okay, because mrs is a damn teacher, all of you can do your homework in here, but remember. You have to finish it?"
That‘s is a nice story in the making.It will need some editing bc of some lost words and the other normal little prob‘s, but it’s a good read nonetheless.
ON THE NEXT DAY WE WERE MARRIED....!!!
I walked into a big room that looked like the living room. The glass doors behind was clear enough to see the beautfiul veiw behind with the view of the whole city, i looked down at the white couch that was covered with 3 bodies. One of them had red hair and the other had dirty blonde hair. I squinted closer at the blonde and gasped.
"May it be the hordes of hell or the sheer power of a dragon, whether I am alone or not, I will be there to preserve the weak, to protect the people who call for help, and most of all To be the guardian that herminia intended to create"
Looking at her cooking made him feel so blessed, he wasn't even bothered that his two children are shaking him.
"No, you're not. Just kil-"
"Okay, guys! Listen up!"
Didn't make sense not to live for fun