Tameru
have been following this book for a quite a lot of time ig, it looks promising.
Wow bro you are doing a fine job..... Good luck my fellow Ero novelist.
I like this book, I hope you can more update chapter, more battle, more intimate moment, and more plots. So keep hard work.?????????????????
To make the review simple at first I will just say this is amazing. Now a little deep review (?)It has a lot of potential and everything is good. Well, character design is a problem since I don't really see any description of a character which makes me hard to think how they look like but it's not really that big of an issue. The story is amazing so the plot covers it up.Other than that the story is amazing! I wish the author to keep writing it and I hopefully can say "I was a fan before it got famous" one day. ❤️
Wow, this is a wonderful start, I can't wait for more updates.
It was intriguing!I love the story.?❤Beautiful masterpiece.
Well written but has 1 major demerit. 122 chapters in and he's still in the academy......C'mon. at this rate its looking like i'm closer to retirement than he is to shippuden
I love this story. The characters are really interesting and likable. ???????????????????????????????????
I like the story of how the MC's power will grow along with the power of his friends. I feel that this story also does a good job of depicting friendship, rivalry, and love.
This is the third attempt for you to make the same story and it seems that you've at least learned from your past mistakes.But still, it seems you need to learn more about making these Web novels.I really do hope you continue, I have never seen a such persistent author.
Read like 30 chapters. Story still doesn't make any sense and mc is an Idiot
Logically, the novel is progressing in a manageable way for now. The only problem is that the girl next to the MC can somehow keep up with him. And the girl has no special lineage. It's uploaded almost every day. The average episode length is neither too short nor too long.
