This novel is a masterpiece in the making. I usually wait until at least 100 chapters to leave a review, if I bother at all, but here I am at only 60 because it's just so damn good. Do yourself a favour and start reading now. Seriously, if you have gotten this far into my review and are still reading this dribble, you are soft in both heads for wasting even this much time.
just disappointed, the novel has an unbelievable potential but the author does not manage to sublimate his work and tell a good story with these damages
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Good story author! Keep it up! I'm not going to be one of those readers that are just simping for the author in the reviews section, so I'mma tell you straight up. This book could be better. But hey! I'm liking this book a lot anyway, so do I care really? No, lol. An extra chapter a day wouldn't hurt though...
Ichibi, Nibi, bokuwa Tobi!
It's a good one, with the mix of isekai/evil villain/ world system. Though it does go down on an overpowered mc, it only stands on the perspective on the world he was thrown upon. It's a jewel on its own but it still stands that the MC is evil through and through.
Writing Quality: The writing quality is phenomenal. The punctuation, spelling, grammar, all are really good and well designed. Next to no errors on the pacing, tone, and adjectives are well written and spread throughout the novel to give a nice variety without scaring the reader off nor boring enough to cause you to lose interest.Updating Stability: Posts daily and each chapter is a nice read that draws you in and leaves you wanting more. Story Development: The background of our MC is ambiguous and mysterious. How he was transported to this world, why he was sent there, and how come he has the system are all a mystery at this time. The plot progresses fast enough that it the story isn’t stagnant but not too fast to the point where you are lost with what is going on. Character Design: You have a wide range of supporting cast to choose from and each are unique and they are believable. The characters seem real and you most certainly will find at least one relatable character which is an amazing feat.The MC is not overpowered to the point where he is invincible, but can be kinda dense at times and this makes him feel relatable. World Design: The world is still very much a mystery but it’s absolutely expansive and the author has an excellent skill with exposition that just draws you in and brings you into the story. Absolutely excellent novel and it well crafted and willing to bet with time it will become one of the best novels on the platform. Don’t sleep on this novel, add it to your library and you will not be disappointed!
I have only read one chapter so far so I will be sure to update this review in the future The grammar spelling mistakes incorrect words etc break the flow of the story as I have to stop myself sometimes and try and figure out what is actually being said I also feel that the first chapter moves very quickly with very little world building or any build up whatsoever which I feel is necessary since unlike quick wear world hopping novels this is different I appreciate that the authors first language isn’t English however the use of an editor or someone to look it over and make sure that the errors are caught and remedied would make this story much better
I love this book, the writing is beautiful, the character discriptions are beautiful. The only complaint is about Mo Ran. He raped his shizun and mistreated him in every way in his past life. according to my morals, that is unacceptable. Other than that, beautiful work
A traditional cultivation novel, the mc is born without feelings and considers everyone literally as tools. At first glance, it seems that he is acting with unjustified cruelty and doing some things without meaning, but it becomes clear later that everything is accurately calculatedIf you like cultivation novels with a strong mc and intricate plot, you'll love this one
Good novel, been waiting for 3 thousand years worth of updates to binge-read, but it died unexpectedly.I'm sad now.Will wait for future updates, I hope someone raises this novel from the dead. I'll be waiting because I'm sick of MTLs.
Nice novel, the plot is very interesting and unique still waiting for more chapters. keep up the good work!!! will recommend to other readers